Cherry Knots

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Blurb: Declan Harte, class clown and notorious troublemaker, has never had trouble landing girls, or dating them…until it comes to the ultimate determining factor of every romance:

A kiss.

So when Eloise McAllister, the quiet, shy girl of the class surprises everyone by tying a cherry knot with her tongue during a challenge, Declan knows that she's the one who can help him perfect his kissing technique.

It should have been easy.

After all, what kind of trouble could one cherry knot possibly bring?

Author: hepburnettes

Genres: Teen Fiction, Short Story

Comments:

"so simple yet so amazing i love this" Skittles8910

"This is awesome, love it!" marcels_girl1

My Opinion

This book was a worthwhile read in my opinion. The concept that the ability to tie a cherry knot with your tongue made you a good kisser was an interesting one, and I liked the plot twist with Orla . . . yeah, trying not to spoil anything, but that was unpredictable, and therefore an effective plot twist.

Eloise was an interesting character, and it was easy to relate to her, and Declan had a likeable and charming nature that made you automatically want him to end up with our protagonist. Overall, the charactization was excellent.

There was also good grammar, as there were no obvious flaws, and the chapters were of a good length, not too short, but also not suffocatingly long. Generally speaking, it was an awesome book, and anyone reading this should read it!

GeekGirl :D

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⏰ Last updated: Jan 14, 2014 ⏰

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