beginning of the broken storm

chapter 1

I was cold as the wind blew through my pelt. I looked up at the sky, and the moon was shining bright. Then, I looked back down, padding through the forest.
I was hungry and alone. I didn't know how to fight or hunt. I didn't know who I was. I didn't know my name. All I could remember was the way my family died.
And how my father left us and my brother... How much he hated me. I stopped as my stomach growled. I sniffed the air catching the scent of a mouse, I dropped into my Crouch
As I spotted the mouse. I moved forward stepping on a twig. The mouse shot it's ears up and ran. I bolted after running as fast I could to catch it. The mouse ran into a hole.
"Fox dug" I yowled with anger and stalked through the forest again. I smelt strange scent around me the scent of other cats. I reached the twolegs place. I looked around spotting a black tom stalking around.
So I followed him. He broke into a run, then I did too. "Did I lose him?" I thought stopping looking around, I spotted him again but with two other tom that were both bigger than the black tom. I hide behind a fence watching the toms talk."Ok scourge, I have to get back now" the brown tom meowed.
"Very well Tigerclaw we will meet again soon" Scourge meowed nodding. The other tom wispers something to Scourge then pads away. Tigerclaw got up dipping his head to Scourge.
Stalking away. I watch Scourge as he sat still."what are you doing here!" I jumped when I heard a growl behind me. I turned to see the other tom. I looked at him with fear in my eyes.
"Put me down!"I squealed as he picked me up taking me over to Scourge. He put me down in front of him. I looked at him with fear."what's your name kit!!" Scourge hissed.
I was to scared to speak."I said what's your name!!!" he growled "i- I don't k- know" I squeld in fear."where's your mother?!" Scourge asked sharply "d-dead!" I squeald as my pelt bristle with fear.
"Your father?" he asked with a softer tone in his voice "I don't know""he left" I meowed, my voice shook."do you have any siblings?" Scourge asked "two sisters but dead. And a brother that hates me" I mutters.
"What happened to them?" he asked looking at me with softer eyes.
" a badger got into our den." I started "my mother was fighting it. And my brother told me to get our sisters out. But!" I meowed with sadness my voice shook "another badger came out and attacted then. I couldn't save them"
"When I got out I found my brother and he was mad. And told me how much he wished it was me dead and how much he hated me.""I ran away that night" I meowed as tears came down my cheeks. I looked away from Scourge and the tom.
"Scourge what do you want me to do with the kit""do you want me to kill him" the tom asked. Fear shot into my eyes. I started to shake.
"No""your name will be Broken" Scourge meowed. I took a breath of relief and I started to look up at Scourge.
"You will be my son" he meowed.
"But Scourge!!!" the tom meowed with a little growl " no!!! Bone!!" Scourge snapped. Bone fell silent.
"Come on let's meet the clan" he meowed padding away. Broken followed him.
He looked back at Bone who was following behind. Bone gave him a look. Broken felt chills go through his pelt, he padded a little faster."I hope the cats are nice" he thought as they padded into a Valley.
Broken smelled cats. Lots of them.
Cats started to appear."bloodclan come and meet our newest member. My son Broken" Scourge yowled.
They stared at Broken. He padded through the camp feeling uncomfortable as most of the eyes were still on him. Most of the cats gave him nasty looks.
"Hi Broken welcome to bloodclan. I'm Sage" a light Brown she cat padded up to him." let me show you to your nest" she meowed leading him through camp.
He felt uneasy about most cats. Broken spotted a Brown tabby tom that looked like his brother."Hey!!! Watch it kit!! Our you'll be crowfood!!" hissed a huge gray tom with scars as he bumped into him. "Broken over here!" sage called
Broken backed away from the tom running towards Sage. He enters a den and looks around as other kits played. He sat down.
A ginger she kit that was smaller then Broken stalked over to him.
"hi I'm Hazle what's yours?" she asked. He looked at her "it's Broken" he meowed
"your Scourges new son!!" she squealed with excitement."what's so good about that?" broken thought nodding his head
"Hazle! Get away form that flee-pelt!" hissed a grayish oarnge tom that was bigger than broken."he's not a flee-pelt! He Scourges new son!" Hazel hissed with challenge in her eyes.
"Are you challenging me!" The tom hissed ready to pounce on Hazel.
"Hazle, Tank chill we don't want to scare him away" be for Hazel could respond meowed a white tom with a smoky white she kit at his side.
"Hi I'm Tamer, that's Tanner my brother and over there is Shadow he doesn't talk much" the she cat meowed." so your Scourges son?" Tanner asked walking around Broken.
"Y-yeah. Is a bad thing?" Broken asked " no it's just-"" Tanner, Tamer it's time to eat" a white she cat called as they hopped away to their nest.
"Sky we met Scourges son" Tamer smiled and looks over at Broken. Sky looked at him uneasy."Hazle, Tank come" called a ginger she cat laying in a nest with Shadow next to her.
They stalked towards the she-cat. Broken watched Hazel as the pretty she cat was smiling."move kit!" Broken heard a familiar voice. Broken looks behind himself to see the gray tom again. Broken quickly jumps up and got out of his way. He watch the tom pad over to Hazle, Tank and Shadow.
"Scar!!!!" Hazel squealed with excitement as she ran up to him. Scar lick her on the head then laid next to the she-cat in the nest."Polly Scar! Look at my hunting crouch" Tank meowed crouching. Scar nodded to his son then got up licking his mates ear then left the den. "That must have been their father" Broken thought.
"Broken I want you to meet someone" Sage meowed poking her head in the den.
He got up padding over to her."this is Evy. She going to be your nursing mother and this is Cherry" Sage meowed, he looked up at Evy and saw sadness in her eyes. Cherry leaned close to Evy then started to sniff him moving closer slowly.
She looked at him with big eyes."she must be a moon younger than me" Broken thought looking at the small kit.
"You smell funny" she meowed. Broken flatten his ear, Evy stalked to a nest, with Sage by her side. "So your going to be my brother. Yay!" Cherry purrs bouncing around Broken. He gave Cherry a smile then pads over to the nest Evy was in. Broken lays next to Evy as Cherry ran up to him crouch in front of him.
Broken closed his eyes. He was to tired to eat. He drifted of in to sleep.

"Son...brother" Broken Heard voices. He looked around. He was in darkness. " hello?" he asked "you couldn't save us""what kind of brother are you!!" a she cats voices rasped "I hate you!!! I never want to see you again!!!!!!!" Hissed a tom.
Broken looked around spotting to she cats playing. He looked closer as the she cats stopped and fell to the ground. Broken ran towards them. He looked at there lifeless bodies.
"I hate you!! I wish you were dead instead!!!" he Heard a growle. Broken turned he saw a Brown tabby tom looking at the ground.
" you didn't save them!!" the tom hissed "I'm sorry" broken mutter as he started to shake "you couldn't save us!" Broken looked back a the she cats. They were standing up, blood was all over them. Broken backed away from them bumping into the tom realizing he got closer. Broken stares at the tom in Fear. He started to lift his head up "you should be dead!!!" hissed the tom looking up at broken. Broken widen his eye shaking in fear. The tom was crying blood. The tom sprang at him, pinning him. Broken was to scared to fight back. The tom bit down on broken throat.
Broken tryed to get air. He gasped his eyes open looking around.
He was back in bloodclan. Broken spotted Shadow sitting at the entrance."had a bad dream?" Shadow asked not looking away from the stars.
"Yeah" Broken meowed getting up padding over to him.
"Why are you out here?" Broken asked sitting next to Shadow.
"I like to look at the stars. Reminds me about my parents" Shadow meowed
"So you mean Polly and Scar arnt your real parents?!" Broken was shock.
"Yeah my parents died" Shadow meowed starting to look down form the stars
"How did they die??" Broken asked
Shadow was silent for a few Heartbeats.
" my father was a forest cat and my mother was a bloodclan cat. They became mates and when I was born. They took me to a froset clan. The forest cats were Furious that they killed my mother and sent my father away."" He brought me to bloodclan, but Scourge didn't let him join he let me join then killed my father" Shadow meowed looking at the
Ground.
Broken looked at him." what should I say?" he thought "my family died too" Broken meow hoping he said the right thing.
Shadow was silent." we sould get some sleep" Shadow got up and padded to Polly. Broken followed padding over to his nest.
He curled up closer to evy.
"What's wrong Broken?" she meow startling him " just a bad dream" he lied he wasn't sure he could trust Scourge. He closed his eyes again falling asleep.