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Ottersplash

#3 for @EMMYsketches! Hope you like it! @EMMYsketches's answers are normal, and my replies are in bold.

Name: Ottersplash

A good name, but one already used in the series.

Gender: female

No comment.

Clan: RiverClan

Nice.

Age: 31 moons

No comment.

Status: warrior

Good job not making Ottersplash a leader or medicine cat or deputy! :D

Quote: "if it doesn't kill you, it's either on your side, or useless."

Five star answer! This is a great quote!

Eye color: yellow

Good color.

Pelt color: dark brown

Nice :)

Markings: white chest, white paws, white bridge of nose.

Good markings.

Scars: one on her right shoulder, two separate ones on her left hind leg.

Good places.

Body type: she is quite small and slim.

Okay.

Other appearance traits: none

No comment.

Likes: hunting and exploring with others, sharing tongues, entertaining kits.

Those are good likes.

Dislikes: being alone, negative cats, getting wet.

Nice, nice :)

Parents: Beetlewing and Duststorm

Good names. They make sense and have not been used by Erin Hunter.

Siblings: Eeltail

This has already been used. Maybe Eelpelt, Eelfur or Eelclaw would be better.

Mate: none

No comment.

Kits: none

No comment.

Mentor: Briarfang

Good name, as briars are prickly like teeth :)

Apprentices: Sparrowtail, Mintleaf.

Mintleaf is good, but Sparrowtail has been used before.

Friends: Sootflower, Harepelt.

Good names

Enemies: Maplefur

Also a good name.

Best skill: she has powerful hind legs, so she is good at hunting birds.

Good skill, but RiverClan cats rarely hunt anything but fish, so maybe change her Clan to ThunderClan or SkyClan if you want to keep this. Unless this is a skill that is a secret or doesn't help her much.

Other skills: none really

So she can't do anything else good? RiverClan cats need to be able to swim and catch fish, or they won't be able to hunt enough food for their Clan.

Powers: none.

Okay.

Weakness: fighting in bushes

Good weakness :)

Leadership: 3

Agility: 5

Stamina: 7

Speed: 3

Stealth: 8

Strength: 6

Defense: 4

Not much to add here.

Fight style: aggressive

Good. Not a commonly used style. I like it!

Other features: none

Okay.

History: is known for good mentoring skills

Wait, what? I'm sorry, but this is not a history. A history would be like 'When Ottersplash was a newborn, her parents...' or something.

Rating: 2 1/2 stars out of 5.

Hopefully then this was helpful. I'm sorry if I was harsh. A few name changes, a personality and a history could make this a great character, but right now now then it's a little boring. Thank you!