Second Chance (Revision)

Overnight

Nagkita si Simon at Ariel

Ariel : so how was it?
Simon: ikaw nalang ang tumingin (handed him the folder, dahan dahan binuksan ni Ariel tapos napatingin sya kay simon)
Ariel : so tama nga.... Theo is not my Son. (Napasuntok sa misa)
Simon: ang sama talaga ni Cherrie i can't believe na aabot sya sa ganito.
Ariel : she ruin my Life, my Family pare mapapatay ko talaga sya. (Encircle his fist)
Simon: ano ka ba kalma lang... Maging masaya nalang tayo kasi nalaman na natin ang totoo.
Ariel : nakakainit ng dugo.... Masaya na sana kami ngayon ni Carmen.
Simon: atleast you can fix things with your Family now. Mababawi mo na sila. Di pa huli pare... (Tap his shoulder and smile)
Ariel : kaya..... Salamat pare huh?
Simon: all for you.... (Smile)

Sa bahay nila Carmen

Sandy: Daddy your here....
Ariel : yes baby where's your Mom? (Forehead kiss)
Sandy: di pa umuuwi eeeeh may meeting pa daw.
Ariel : aaaah ganun buh? Wheres Khalleb?
Sandy: nasa room natutulog na. You want to silip him?
Ariel : no baby baka magising.... Susunduin ko nalang Mom mo.
Sandy: hintayin mo nalang sya dito for sure uuwi na yun....
Ariel : may sasabihin kasi akong importante sa i really need to talk to her.
Sandy: ok Dad....
Ariel : matutuwa ka sa ibabalita ko.
Sandy: magpapakasal na ba kayo ulit ni Mommy?(natawa si Ariel )
Ariel : dadating tayo dyan.... Sige na alis na ako.

Samantala
Nung pauwi na si Carmen galing hospital hinabol sya ni Jay sa parking area

Jay: Doc can I talk to you.
Carmen : no!!! (Nagmamadaling lakad)
Jay: please (hold her hand)
Carmen : Jay ano buh? Let me go... (Trying to escape)
Jay: i just want to talk to you. (Pagpipilit nya)
Carmen : sa ayaw ko.... (Trying to push him) sisigaw ako pag di mo pa ako binitiwan.
Jay: you can scream all you want... (Hinila nya si Carmen sa madilim na lugar ng Parking area)
Carmen : ano buh? Where you gonna take me?
Jay: I just want to talk to you. Pero ayaw mo... (Galit na sabi)
Carmen : sa ayaw kitang makausap...
Jay: sa ayaw mo hindi kakausapin mo ako... (Pin her on a wall) bat ba ayaw mo sa akin? (Carmen's trying to escape) bat ba nagpapakagago ka dun sa Ariel na yun? (Kiss her forehead) andito ako ooooh mahal na mahal kita (naiiyak si Carmen sa takot, inis)
Carmen : Jay please.... Parang awa mo na wag mong gawin to... (Nagmamakaawa)
Jay: pinilit mo kong gawin to... (She's kissing Carmen pilit naman umiiwas si Carmen sigaw sya ng sigaw then someone from behind pull Jay out and punch him)
Ariel : walang hiya ka... (Suntok) ang manyakis mo...(suntok, he grab Jay's collar) don't you ever touch her again. (Push him)
Napaupo si Jay sa sahig... He wipes his blood in his mouth then go. Ariel immediately look for Carmen na napaupo at iyak ng iyak... Niyakap nya lang ito.
Ariel : Your safe now... I'm here... (Hug her tight iyak lang ng iyak si Carmen)
Carmen: Thank You.... (nanginginig nyang sabi)
Ariel : lets go home.(inalalayan patayo si Carmen then sinakay sa kotse)

On their way Home

Ariel : Hey.... Its ok now... Andito na ako... (Glancing at Carmen na nakatingin lang sa may bintana at tahimik at napapaiyak pa din)
Carmen : don't take me home yet.... Ayaw kong makita ng mga bata na ganito. (Sad tone)
Ariel : so san mo gusto?
Carmen : anywhere just for tonight... I want to breath....
Ariel :ok what about in tagaytay?
Carmen : wherever you want. (Sabay tingin sa bintana... Halata ni Ariel ang pagkatakot nya)
Ariel : ok... Matulog ka muna... Gigisingin lang kita pag andun na tayo. (Smile)
Nakatulog si Carmen nakarating nadin sila sa tagaytay. Tiningnan lang ni Ariel si Carmen na mahimbing na natutulog. He fix her hair na nakatakip sa muka nya... Cup her face and trace her nose.
Ariel : its alright hon... Andito lang ako lage... Hindi hindi kita iiwan. (Then Carmen move a bit nagising sya)
Carmen : are we here already? (While wiping his eyes)
Ariel : nasa tagaytay tayo. We can spend night here.
Carmen : ok.... Thank you... (Smile)
Ariel : are you alright now? (Smile)
Carmen : I'm ok... Knowing you are here. I know i'M safe... (Smile)
Ariel : makita ko lang muka ng Jay na yun ulit mapapatay ko na talaga yun.
Carmen : oooh tama na... Lets not talk about it...
Ariel : sorry... Simula ngayon ihahatid sundo na kita.
Carmen : what?
Ariel : ooooh wag ng pumalag... Baka pagtangkaan k ulit ni Jay.
Carmen : sige na payag na...
Ariel : its a deal huh?
Carmen : baka maapektuhan ang trabaho mo. Dagdag mo pa ako sa respunsibilidad mo.
Ariel : ikaw pa ang lakas2 mo sa akin. I will always find time basta ikaw.. (Smile and Wink)
Carmen : salamat talaga( then kiss him on the cheeks, nagulat naman si Ariel look at Carmen and she smile at him and he did the same)

Kinabukasan nagising si Carmen na akap akap nya si Ariel

Carmen : Goodmorning! (Wipe her eyes then she second look Ariel ) Ariel ? (Agad kumiwalas)
Ariel : Ooooh bakit?
Carmen : bat ka andito.... Diba dapat sa sahig ka?
Ariel : pasenxa na not comfortable kasi...
Carmen : ok! Ok! Lets go home na. Kids might looking for Us.
Ariel : are you ok now?
Carmen : aaaahm I'll be fine. Salamat talaga huh?
Ariel : wag ka munang pumasok sa Hospital huh? Take a rest be with the Kids.
Carmen : thank you (smile)

Maya maya umuwi na sila pagkarating sa bahay nila sinalubong ni Sandy.

Sandy: Mom? Dad? (Run and hug both)
Carmen : hi Baby... Wheres your little bro?
Sandy: sleeping at his room.
Ariel : sandy baby did you take good care of your brother?
Sandy: of course Dad. (Smile)
Carmen : lets go inside...
Sandy: Dad lets go (hold Dad's hand tumingin naman si Ariel kay Carmen And she just Smile pumasok na sila)
Sandy: where have you been? Did you spent the night together?(nagtinginan ang dalawa)
Carmen : naku Sandy ayan ka naman... (Pinch nose)
Sandy: why? Just asking Mom!! (Teasing look)
Ariel : Sandy? Ikaw talaga huh? (Nagkukulitan ang tatlo)
Sandy: ok I surrender! (Raise her hands)
Ariel : ok but seriously Sandy you take care of Mom and Baby ok? You know I'm not always there.
Sandy: Dad i always do that...
Ariel : ok just call me whenever something happen just a call away.. And one thing don't let that Tito Doc come near your Mom ok? (Smile and look at Carmen na napasmile din)
Sandy: Why? He done something wrong?
Carmen : lets not talk about it...
Ariel : I better go may meeting pa ako. (Tumayo and kiss Sandy cheeks then nakisa nya din si Carmen but sa lips nakalimutan nya ata na di na sila mag asawa nagulat si Carmen mej matagal din nakaliplock sila then back to their senses)
Ariel : I'm sorry...
Carmen : No! No! Nabigla ka lang... You better go.. (Smile)
Ariel : ok!! You take care... Bye sandy... (Look at Sandy who's kilig na kilig sa ganap)
I love you... (Looking at lea then smile tapos umalis na sya)
Sandy: uy Mom! Namumula pisngi mo!!! (Teasing her Mom)
Carmen : Sandy! Ikaw talaga... (Smile)
Sandy: mom I can feel the Butterflies on my stomach (laugh)
Carmen : lets go na nga.. Puntahan na natin si Khalleb... (Go upstair na parehaong nakangiti)

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