Inverse- Allary
Okay, this story is not perfect- there are a few spelling mistakes and the wrong use of grammar at certain points, however, it's nothing that a little editing could not help. This story is so unique and very innovative, which is rare for Wattpad.
Your lead character in the beginning was slightly cringey and annoying, in the way she was clingy with her boyfriend, but the way you portrayed her feelings was beautiful. The switch up to where she wakes up though, I love it. It's contrasting to the first three chapters of your story and action packed and puts me on edge. Aside from the few errors, I love it! I could imagine this story to be a made into a film and I can only encourage you to keep writing.
Although I'm only critiquing four chapters, my curiosity has been spiked and I am going to continue to read on. Inverse, from what I've read so far, has the potential for greatness and is really entertaining. If you love romance with substance to it, this is the story to read. I would highly advise this book.
I, particularly think the cover of the book could be improved. For a story with s much contrast and dynamic, the cover is so drab, un-eye-catching and slightly irrelevant. It's black and white. Boring. Although, usually I think simplistic covers are best, in my opinion it's just not fitting for this novel.
Story: 7.9
Cover: 4.5
