by Lilypottergreatness
- in the Harry Potter category.
Summary:
"What's wrong, mate?" Albus asked me. He looked at where I was looking- the point where Lily had disappeared- and slapped his forehead. "You STILL fancy my sister?"
Rose didn't say anything, which was odd for her. I turned my attention back to Al.
"So what if I do?" I asked with false bravado.
"Mate, she hates you like she hates Derrick McLaggen. Maybe worse."
I remembered McLaggen. He was the Slytherin that I'd hexed into oblivion after he'd tried to make a move on Lils.
That was when she'd hexed me worse than I'd hexed him.
"I don't need your help," she'd snapped at me, and stomped away.
"You're welcome," I'd sighed.
Now, looking at that small, obscure point where she'd vanished, I wanted to go after her, make her talk to me. But I knew Al was right.
She hated me.
And that, reader, is how I started my year- looking forward to fun and torture in the sparkling, dancing, penetrating blue eyes of Lily Luna Potter, the daughter of the Boy who Lived.
Writing Skills: 8.5 (Great!)
Originality: 7 (Not the same as all other Scorily fanfics. Had more of a plot.)
Character Adhesion: 9 (Love Harry)
Votes: 2.5K
Reads: 70.7K
Original Impression: 8 (Possibly the cutest thing we have ever read.)
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