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HEY!!! this IS my first fanfiction, i know my grammar sucks, BUt PLEASE tell me what i can improve on!!!!
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POV OF YUME:
HMM.. What's this light hurting my eyes.."Huu...Huu..." I could hear someone's heavily breathing right beside me...As I opened my eyelids, a pearly white ceiling could be seen.Where am I? I'm quite certain this isn't my small hostile's ceiling..I turned my head to the table beside the bed i was lying on,'where is my phone?!?!' I thought. All of a sudden,i was hugged by someone."Morning Yume!"ahhhh SUBARU?!?!?!? "Wha are you..." I was interrupted by a sudden kiss from Subaru... My cheeks and ears felt warm I closed my eyes slowly and embrace him.It was a deep kiss, I sure was embarrassed.But it was a good one,it tasted sweet like honey and a warm and soothing feeling was overflowing continuously."Good Morning Subaru!" I said with a cheerful voice and smiled sheepishly at him.I just moved in with Subaru yesterday, after him complaining that he was lonely for not seeing me in his busy schedule. The principal didn't say much though, he approved of us dating and let me live with Subaru.Although we're both idols now, it was so weird hehe.
POV OF SUBARU:
I woke up way too early,but the good thing was i get to see Yume's sleeping face .She's way too cute ,I would kiss her right away I requested that I want her to live together with me, not because i was lonely though, I wanted to let the stupid nozumo to see that she's mine .She looks so peaceful and defenceless in front of me."Baka ,don't look so defenceless ... I might eat you up ya know?" "Huii...." I poked her cheeks gently and she left off a tiny snore. Hmph see if you'll still sleep so peacefully , I caressed her blondish pink hair,and kissed her soft , pudding like cheeks."ah..." I knew I accidentally woke her up,so I quickly pretend to be asleep and snored loudly. As she woke up to look for her phone, i sneakily hugged her from behind,I couldn't hold it back anymore and kissed her without permission, i closed my eyes and she embraced me. The warm and calming feeling could be felt while a honey like flavor could be tasted, flowers were blooming inside of me and butterflies were flying around my stomach.I was a little nervous, for i was always nervous because of her.
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