So far, The Deeplands has only been read once in each part. It would mean a lot if someone would comment what they enjoy about the book, or why they started reading, as well as any suggestions. I will give full credit to anyone who gives me a valid suggestion I use.
Thanks!
Question: Is the first person point of view giving a good explanation of everything that is going on? Should I move it to current first person rather than the notebook? Should I have the points of view of more than one character?
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The Deeplands
FantasyAlexandra, has been alone ever since her parents disappeared on her 12th birthday. Her quiet, lonely life is interrupted when Her Royal Highness Sileena Sporthood's soldiers come knocking on her body. She is taken to the Fortress where she discove...
