The fire

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First I smell, then hear, then see...

I hear a terrifying scream come from downstairs. As I shot up from my bed nothing would process.. I couldn't see I could barely breath! I looked around to see smoke caving in on me and every second got worse and harder to breath!

" CAITLIN, *cough* YOU NEED TO LEAVE ... NOW" I heard my mum lightly scream, she seemed very weak!
In fear , I throw myself onto the floor getting as low as possible trying to escape the smoke.

Practically falling down the stairs I start to search for the door handle, The smoke was forever getting thicker and more black.

"MUM" I try to call out but I receive no answer.
Desperate to escape I head to what I think is the door.

* CRASH*
The roof starts to collapse and I don't know if I can make it. I start to feel weak and can't breath!
I'm slowly collapsing to the floor , before blanking out I see a tall bright figure heading towards me,

Is this god ? A-am I dead?

With out another thought.. I'm out

Sooo this is my first part so tell me what you think and if I should bother carrying on..

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