I Forgot Who You Are// ImAnOfficWeirdoOffic

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Title: I Forgot Who You Are (Louis Tomlinson)

Author: ImAnOfficWeirdoOffic (also one of our own workers c: )

Catagory: One Direction Fan FIction

Okay tbh... this  book was great! I love the ammount of detail put into every chapter!

Some of the names however were a little hard to predice what they would sound like in real life, such as Margaux or Areeyah, it might be better to do some names what everybody knows. I do love the uniquness of the names. Although when I first saw them I thought that it was a typo

The story as a whole is awesome! My favorite part/chapter was the 5th (A Simple Contact) because of the way that the characters interacted with eachother (especially the sass part... i love me some sass!) specificly i liked the interaction between all of the boy's and Clair. They have a great personal connection and it's funny as hell!

What I didn't like was Simply Jeangaux part 1. It lacked detail, and while you might have intended it to be that way it could have just used a little more description of what they were doing that would have made even a filler like it that much better!

Thank you for being a part of our review's!

-Kat :)

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