Rember Me ( Jenna Coma)

alternate ending

This alternate ending can be separate. This alternate ending joins with chapter 7 

STOP NOW- ALTERNATE ENDING 1
as she had been out for so long. almost a year now. it fell in the line of her close relatives to decide what to do next. it was the 24 th of june and it was unanimously agreed that it was all in jennas best intrest that the rest of the life support machinery be turned off.it was 4pm and they all asked for some time alone with her the last person was peter. he tentativly wispered in jennas ear.  i have a duty of care, its ok i will remember you,clara oh clara i am loosing somone i can bear to loose. look how far i went for fear of loosing you. when something gose missing you can allways recreate it by the whole it left. theres nothing there just nothing. i am alone and very very scared you still wont be there. thank you for exactly the same. thank you for keeping me s safe. don you dare die on me. i miss you jenna. i  asked the docters if there was anything i pleaded and begged them to save you. but they couldent do anything.jenna. nothing. sit tight i will come back for you. stories are where memories go when their forgotten. ill be a story in you head.  i am bargening for you. i am loosing somone who matters to me. eveything you could have said i allreday know. i love you, evytime we do something like this what if something happens to you. the memory of her will hurt so much that i wont be able to breath.how can i smile. dont worry i am not going anywhere for now, let it hurt and let it burn. get up beat it break free. we all have to face death eventally ours or somone elses. look at you uour yeys your never giving up in kindness in anger. i will  run untill the pain catches up it will still be there. stay with me. mabey some of the memories of you become songs. i don’t think i could ever forget you. the days you loose someone isnt the worst. So get up and win jenna. I Don’t want  to go. I … love you.
goodbye Jenna . BREATH.
as he silently kissed her on the forehead moving a strand away wisperd come back, jenna i love you. with cracked voice he cried enough water to fill a river and a pond and just enough to water a rose.
Moments later the all asked the doctors to come in and turn off the life support machiene. In the process of doing so they all embrased jenna in a uptight hug. As the doctor turned off the life support machiene there was a pulse then it flatlined,peter whispered breath jenna I love you.michelle john and ingrid said stop,shes is choking, there was a pulse the doctor quickly removed the ventilator as he found a pulse and a pair of blue eyes stared at them. Then a sigh of relife and a panicked response. As she Everything went wrong from the moment she woke. She wasn’t herself,didn’t act herself with her professonalism shyness or politeness and most importantly had no idea who anyone was, peter,alex,michelle ingrid or john. Not even steven.