Title: Just Stop
Author: lilmurray69
Rate: 8.5
Notes: I really enjoyed reading this. It had a couple awkward spots where things were pretty confusing, but then again, all stories do.
Make sure when your characters are thinking, you italicize it. And when an interjection or something where a comma is needed, you put the comma. Commas are important things. xD
Over all, I really liked the first chapter. Your description was spot on. Just make sure not to start the majority of your sentences with I. (:
Much love,
Lois
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