Heart Break

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As I stated earlier this is my first fanfiction I welcome criticism, but just don't be a jerk about it. This fanfiction is going to be slash, yoai, BL, or whatever you want to call it if you don't like don't read it. My grammar is not the best and I am not a creative writer. I'm also welcome advice on what direction I should take this and/or future fanfiction.

**Disclaimer I do not own Harry Potter or any other movies or shows I may use in the making of this fanfiction**

~Harry's pov.~

I ran down the corridor as fast as I could trying to get away from what I just heard. I never thought they would do this to me. Why did they betray me? Did they ever love or ever were my friend? Were they using me this whole time? I thought with tears running down my face.

**flashback**

Professor Dumbledore sent me a note saying to his office tonight. I decided to show up early to get whatever he wanted to talk about over with. As I got closer to his office I hear my best friends voices.
"When will we be get our money I tired of pretending to be his friend" -Ron
I felt dread feel me as I got closer, curious of who he was talking about.
"Yes all he does is whin and complain all day"- Hermione
"Now now children calm down. You will get what you rightfully errand soon as Harry defeats the Dark Lord"-Dumbledore
Angry, hurst, and filled with disbelief I continued to listen even as ever fiber of my being told me to run and never look back.
"We risk our lives every year he goes searching for trouble. Everyday is risky just by being near him and we're not being paid for our troubles"-Hermione
"After Harry defeats the Dark Lord all my plans will fall into place. If he should survive the war he would be taken care off and all he's money and books will be left to you"- Dumbledore
Gasping loudly and quickly covered my mouth as teat filled my eyes. I slowly start to back away from the door as soon as I get far enough I made a run for it.

**End of flashback**

I ran and ran lungs burn and face surely a mess. I don't know where I was going, but I know I couldn't stay here anymore. Suddenly I hit something sold and heard a loud thump and "OW!, watch where your going Potter" the voice sneered not yet seeing who I ran into.

End of first chaper

Ooo Clifhanger don't you just hate those things (laughing evilly). Who did harry run into? What should Harry do about he friends and Dumbledores betrayal? Should he turn he's back on the wizard world? (I typed all this on my phone and from the top of my head so if something doesnt sound right let me know)

-Edited 4-28-17
I got one of my friends to read it, she pointed out some the errors to me.

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