Would You Be So Kind?

Hey Y'all! This is my first story, and naturally it's Jodie (as suggested by @FluffyYoutubers, thanks for the suggestion by the way!)
Tell me how you like it, and how I should improve!
See you in the next chapter!
-Roobutt
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*Dodie's POV*
I stood in front of the mirror, checking how I looked. I shouldn't really be caring about how I look, I mean it is only Jon, but I still wanted to look my best.

Jon and I have been best friends for quite a few years now, but recently I've started falling for him. Naturally, I wrote a song about it. I hope he likes it.

I am brought back to reality by my phone buzzing, telling me that Jon is outside my flat door.

I take one more look in the mirror. I'm wearing a yellow sundress with my shortish brown hair down in curls. I'm wearing my glasses and on my feet I have  brown combat boots.

I take a deep breath and grab my bag and my ukulele, opening the door. I see Jon's smiling face on the other side.

"Hey Dodes!" He says, grabbing my hand.

"Hey Jon!" I reply, setting down my ukulele and locking the door with my hand that isn't being held by Jon.

He can't see it, but I'm blushing on the inside. I mean, look at him! With his blonde hair, blue eyes, jean jacket, and skinny jeans he just looks so cute!

I snap out of it and lock the door, picking up my ukulele.

"Where are we off to today?" He asks as we walk, swinging our joined hands between us. We walk out of the building and I lead him towards the park.

"We're going to the park. I have a new song I want to show you, remember?" I asked, nudging him, a smile on my face.

"Oh yeah!" He face palms, then beams at me. "I'm really excited to hear what you've written this time!"

"Thanks Jon!"

We make it to the park and walk to a bench. I sit down and he sits down next to me, facing me. I smile nervously and take out my ukulele, quickly tuning it.

After I finish tuning my ukulele, I turn to face Jon. He gives me an encouraging smile.

"This song is called, 'Would You be So Kind?'." I say. I take a deep breath and begin.

"I have a question,
It might seem strange.
How are your lungs?
Are they in pain?"

I glance over at Jon, and he's smiling. So far so good. I quickly smile back and continue on with the song.

When the song is over, I glance at Jon again, except he isn't smiling. Did he not like it? Did I mess up? Does he hate me now?

"So.....how do you like it?" I say awkwardly. He looks me straight in the eyes.

"Dodie....was that about me?" He asks, almost frowning. I gulp and nod.

He takes my hands in his. My heart is racing.

"Oh Dodie, I'm so sorry, but I don't like you like that. I'm so sorry." He says.

I feel a lump form in my throat, and tears well up in my eyes.

"O-okay," I manage to croak out, before I start actually crying.

Jon pulls me into a hug, rubbing my back. Muttering "I'm so so sorry Dodes" over and over again.

I sniffled, pulling away. I stayed silent and picked up my ukulele which had been dropped, thankfully not broken. I put it in the case and zipped it up.

I felt a hand on my back.

"Dodes..."

"I have to go Jon. Goodbye." I quickly said, practically sprinting out of the park. I walked home and locked the door before walking to my bedroom, collapsing on my bed in sobs.

I fell asleep a few hours later.
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Hey! That was my first chapter, tell me how you like it. I know the chapter ended kind of abruptly, but I didn't know any other way to end it.

I'll upload the next chapter when I can.