Loss and love [might be rewritten]

Bad news

I bet you that this story is going to be really cheesy. I'll leave you to read.
Someone
"No, There must be some mistake!" A voice wailed. "There is still so much I have to do!" A women walked around her, her eyes soft with sympathy." I'm sorry" she said." I know you expected many more years with your friends before coming to join the dead." The person looked down into the water. The gods waited in watchful silence. "You have served Olympus more faithfully than some have managed in a long lifetime" the goddess went on." It must be unfair that you should have to leave them." The person raised luminous eyes to face the goddess " Hera, I know this isn't your fault. There's no need to apologize." Hera looked at the child" Of course there is. You should know how much your friends owe you". "Every one". A man with black hair and tan skin said walking beside Hera" Us to. None of us would be here without your help" he dipped his head in respect. The child blinked at him" Thank you, Poseidon. I've made mistakes, but I have always tried to do what I believed was right". Then Athena pipes in" we asks no more from our children. If we could change your fate we would. "But remember" , Hera warned," not even we can turn aside the steps of destiny, however much we want to". The person at the center nodded " I understand. And I will try to have courage. Can you tell me when- " Hera shook her head" No. even we cannot see the future so clearly. But when the time comes, you will know and we will be waiting for you".
Sorry for the short chapter. I'll make a longer one next time. I hope that wasn't to stressful. Bye