The afterlife?

Prolouge

Hi! I've decided to started a brand new book. I've had this book idea for a while now but I'm finally getting to actually work on it. I hope everyone ends up liking it. I honestly don't know how prolouges work so I just hope that I did it right?

Prolouge

T H I R D  P E R S O N  P O I N T  O F  V I E W

Loud beeping could be heard down the pale white hospital hall as doctors and nurses came rushing into room 18B, Eimears room. All of her family and Aaron instantly stood up, watching as they all ran through the opaque pale white curtain that divides her personal room and the hospital outside. Eimear has been sick with a rare disease, the Armageddon virus. Luckily, her parents had the money to pay for needed treatment and the doctors said she could survive a couple years more. They did warn the family that there are complications throughout the process considering they are still working on an effective treatment but are working as hard as they can to keep Eimear alive. Eimear has been laying on that hospital bed for a majority of her life, always hoping for her to be able to explore the world outside of these hospital walls, but it was no use.

She was always sick. Obviously, it wasn't the dark-haired girls fault but it is the truth that she's just always severely sick or injured. Her family and Aaron began rushing towards the hospital room when a nurse waved them over sadly. Aaron was the first to arrive as he walked to the nurse. The first thing he asked was, "is she alright?!"

Instead of getting the reassuring nod they all got a small frown from the brown-haired nurse as she held the clipboard to her chest. "We're sorry but the procedures haven't worked at all... she's gone. We're so sorry for your loss," she said, her faint accent lacing with sincerity as Aaron's dark brown eyes instantly became brimmed with tears. Her mother instantly began crying, grabbing a tissue from her back pocket as her big blue eyes filled with tears. She hid her face into her husbands chest as she sobbed, wishing that her baby girl was ok.

Her husband wrapped an arm around her covered arms, holding her, Elizabeth, close. His Hazel eyes filling with tears. Aaron wasn't going to take it as an answer as he ran into the room without permission to see Eimear Black, the girl known for her beautiful bright and golden skin, with pale skin as her beautiful and gleaming green eyes were covered by her now pale eyelids. Her black hair was sprawled all over the white hospital pillow. Aaron instantly kneeled besides her small barricaded bed and grabbed her small manicured hand in his big ones.

His kissed her knuckles and rested his elbows on the white comforter as he just dug his face into the bed and sobbed. The couple came running in, sobbing with him. April 26, 2009 at 2:01 p.m. was definitely the saddest time of their lives.

Well this was short but definitely very sad. Not my best writing but oh well it'll be better in the near future. This is definitely a book I'm going to work on until it's finished.
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