The factory

''Lily I dont think we should go in what if someone catches us'' I said. ''Stop begin a big baby and get in here'' lily told me.  Hi im Aliva Miller  I'm fifth teen years old I live in council bluffs Iowa with my mom and two sisters. Im the oldest out of the kids. Me and my freind  Lily Eric I know a weird last name, but i guess it means something for them well Lily has always wanted to go to the creepy fartory behind my house. ''Hey Lily were did you go its to dark I can't see you'' I yelled. All of a sudden I heard a big bang it made me jump a little ''AHH HELP ME PLEASE'' I knew for a minute it was Lily then I heard someone coming towards me. Then i saw Lily all bloody and with cuts everywhere. ''Oh my god Lily we have to get out of here'' I picked up lily as best as I could but she her weight was to big for me. I fell and Lily was on top of me I couldnt move then I heard someone coming. ''Please don't hurt us im sorry we broke in just please dont hurt us''. Lily finally got up and told me to get up she put one arm around me and I almost had to drag her. I rud my had on the walls to find the door. then I found it but there was someone there I could feel it then it grab my thoart. I could feel its big hands I tried to grasp for air but it was to late I already passed out. when I woke up I looked around the room see if lily was there. I tryed to get up but I was straped down to a table Finally I heard someone coming I lefted my head as far as it could go and I thought it was lily but it wasn't. It was a guy with a hodie on I couldn't see his face but I could his eyes. All of a sudden he started storking my hair he said something but I couldn't here him. He  slaped me in the face and unstarped me from the table and picked me up and brought me to a differernt room. It was pitch black then he droped me to the ground ''When i come back you better be here'' he said. ''Why are you doing this why are you hurting inist girls?'' i asked him but he already left and didnt lock the door I got up and went to the door. I ran down the hallway and i looked in every room then I got to the basement I heard screaming it was lily. Then i heard her say the name ''Please eric I'm sorry please don't hurt Aliva'' Lily said ''WHY CANT I SHE HURT ME'' he yelled. Eric was my ex boyfriend I cheated on him in high shcool with a college boy he left with out anyone knowing. 

Im sorry that it is a long chapter and its bad ill be uploading each chapter a week hope you like it so far peace.