Okay so I need yall's opinion should I re-edit this story and make it to where Masky is all broody and all. Basically a slow burn, or should I continue it like the way it is now? your advice would be really helpful ~author-chan out~

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The Change
Horor~The Fun Has just Begun~ I lived a pretty normal life, typical family and home. I even graduated school and went to collage for 2 years, but then one day that all changed...my family dead, murdered, the day I died, but also the day I met him...my m...