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Helloooo....!!!! So guys am trying my luck in poetry as well... I know I know and I admit that this is not that good but stillLADIES AND GENTLEMEN MY FIRST POETICAL WORK:
   
                  WITHOUT YOU

Behind the veils of ash and smoke
A terror beyound any other spook;
I live in darkI adore dark
Where remains of memories bark;
You see my soul in endless pain
It's hard to admit but it's my gain;
You are my dream, a dream beyound any other dream;
It's the end what I thought was start
Leaving me alone you just left Oh! so smart;
After you I'm leaving a life deprived of angle,
Wherever you are please come to me my angel;
                               -NN

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