Coil

Chapter 3

Crim and Ramona sit on the dirty, cement ground when Crim brings a journal of notes out of her pocket. Ramona gasps as the pages, one-by-one, slip out of the bindings. The paper didnt fly because wind was not present, but one landed right at the foot of a store.

Not many doors to a shop were located in the alley, but it wasn't that rare, but it had a suspicious escence and lots of bugs marching into a crack located on the bottom left corner of the doorway. Ramona glared, while Crim stood up and calmly walked to the loose page.

Ramona steadied herself when she started to change. Her hair grew shorter, once brown eyes, became yellow, and her legs started to ache. Crim ran over to her, ignoring the lost page and put one hand on her head and one on her back. She whispered into her ear, but no one could hear the phrase of mumbles that made Ramona's eyes blink open.

I'm ok now I think I just need some rest. Ramona said calmly, trying to keep Crim calm. Knowing how Crim would act if she was scared, she brushed off the pain and leaned on Crims side to keep her from falling over. 

Crim wore a hopeful smile as she and Ramona walk into the nearby emergency room. Many of the patients scowled at Ramona when she opened her eyes, they were almost snake-like. It was a cold, judgemental look the patients gave her. Ramona however, had no idea that she had changed. The only thing she knew is that she hurt all over. 

The lady at the desk immediatly called a nurse, who then took Ramona and Crim into a private room. The nurse slammed the door after Crim and looked furious, which pissed Crim off greatly, shown when Crim growled at her. The nurse silently judged Ramonas every move while Crim tried to stop herself from attacking the nurse. 

So, whats up? 

WHAT'S UP? WELL FIRST OF ALL MY FRIEND HERE IS IN PAIN AND YOU SAY ¨WHATS UP¨

Calm down, she is just doing h-

NO, SHE ISNT! THAT *bleeping* NURSE IS BEING A COMPLETE *bleep* 

Well, If im being a *bleep* then what are you, Crim?

The nurse sneered, revealing sharp, canine fangs. Crim had steam flowing out of her ears. Ramona looked quite worried as this never happened before. Crim looked down and her hair covered her face. Then, a burst of laughter is broken out as she lifts up her head. Ramona started to cry when she saw Crims eyes. 

They were cold, evil and worst of all...they had turned red...

*Author note*

My apostraphes havent been working on my laptop, so sorry for the inconvenience. Also, I will post at least once a week with this story. If you like my book please tell me if you are! (or you are not, i would like to know that too) One more thing, I am in the seventh grade so i might not be the best writer...yeah