Here we are, I'm ending my third mini-fiction a bit different from my usual work as you just read the letters Alice sent to Jon. I still hope you enjoyed te reading! I'd like your feedbacks, please.
I have to tell the truth... In the beginning, writing the prologue or even the second letter, I'd never thought about killing Alice. But I signed the letter and I wanted to kill her. Not because I don't like my characters : I just couldn't see an other possible end. And at the end of my third letter where she wrote she was capable of doing "everything for them. Family love sucks" didn't really (at all?) helped to save her. It was just another proof she could give her life to save her big sister's. And the idea stayed on my mind until the end.
I already promised myself I would never kill a character since I killed Hope in the OS Forget about the clock (with Louis Tomlinson)! I could have her dating Jon, make them kiss in my epilogue. But I didn't. Because life is not always about fairytales and I write a lot of fictions where people kiss. There's a moment, in the mini-fictions, I fancy a change... So... No couple, no kisses. Nothing, just a dead girl and a poor Jon in love with Alice's words and an idea he had about her. Right or wrong. He was in love with a girl he knew through words.
Love,
Nady.
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Between you and me. (English) // Jon Pfingsten (from An Honest Year - AHY)
FanficThis fanfiction features Jon Pfingsten from An Honest Year. I only wrote the main letters from Alice and Jon's story, and only included those Alice sent to Jon. I mentionned which letters they are, so you can understand their story. The original fr...
