CLOSED Infinity Sky Bookclub

Week Eleven

Hey, here it is, I'm sorry about the delay but I was so sick yesterday, there was no way I could have looked at a screen :(

Anyways, I am surprised by the amount of members that did not reply to their personal message. So here we are, left with 18 members, welcome to the bookclub :)

From now on there are new rules:

1. The amount of members in one group will be reduced to 3.

2. The feedback competition will start from now on. Whoever gives the best feedback will receive a review on the whole book! You can achieve that award multiple times since I have multiple people that could give feedback but the first review will always be from OutTheSky.

3. I don't have to give the award to anyone. If you all give only three-liners, nobody will get it, simple as that. If you want me to, I can post the winner's comments here so that you can see what I chose instead of just a name, what do you think? Should I do that? :)

That's it, nothing else changes. I will change the guidelines once I am done here.

Here are your assignments! :)

OutTheSky for Clan Sky

MSonoda

erinen

The_Lost_Dream_

Assignment: Jasper by erinen

fanna-tastic for Clan Infinity Lovers

Tuliptina

-girlsandgirls

Simbaze

Assignment: Prince of Denmark by Tuliptina

XxxTochixxX for Clan Space

Blue_Opal_Wolf

fanna-tastic

MrBendezedrine

Assignment: Finding those Bobby Pins by fanna-tastic

EyesOfTruth for Clan Ocean

n_ezzatom

XxxTochixxX

SAKrishnan

Assignment: The hidden girl by XxxTochixxX

OutTheSky for Clan Infinity

Hadley_Swiss

NatachaWolf1308

Eunite

Assignment: Healing Hearts by NatachaWolf1308

OutTheSky for Clan Blue

Flutist_1

Everyhearthasahero18

screaming-horan

Assignment: Right Road by Flutist_1

I decided to put up an example. I commented this on a book from a member as an apology that nobody of the group did the assignment. I know that I write a lot and that you cannot always write that much to a story because sometimes there is nothing to talk about, don't worry about that. This is just me trying to give helpful feedback but this is my style and I know that everybody has their own style :)

First of all, I love the idea of the book. The whole story (your blurb is amazing!) is intriguing and you are able to capture everything so well! Up to now, there was barely shown how poor and mistreated the people are but I guess it's because she was only in the building (and the star gazing) up until now. Maybe you find a way to somehow put it in or it happens in the next chapters? I hope so because this would make it more real. You tell the reader all the time how bad everything is for the people, but try to show it a bit more. Maybe a new character outside of the building, maybe a friend who tells stories about how the life outside is. Think about it :) I like how you describe everything very well. I can imagine all your scenes really good and you also have many interesting characters for the first three chapters. I am sure it will be even more soon. And I am totally in LOVE of how professional everything seems. The first chapter was really long and I had to think about how it would be in a hard cover book, your blurb is mysterious and interesting, it's awesome! The second and third chapter are not as long as the first one but it was still amazing. After all, the first chapters are always more of a introduction before the actual plot starts and you did a very good job here! I enjoyed reading your book, it is amazing, you are amazing, keep up the good work! :)

Is that helpful for you guys? :)