Okay, so this is my first fan-fiction I've ever written(HUZZAH) so please give me constructive criticism(be as truthful and rough as you can) so I hope you like it!
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It was a Monday, 3:30 on the dot when John Hamish Watson woke up to hear his father screaming his drunken mind out at his sister, Harry.
"DON'T COME BACK EVER AGAIN YOU WHORE BECAUSE IF YOU DO, I WILL PUT YOU OUT OF YOUR MISERY."
"WELL DONT WORRY BECAUSE YOU'LL NEVER SEE MY FACE OR CLARA'S EVER AGAIN."
Harry growled back at her father as she slammed the trunk of her car. She then got in the drivers seat a drove off in the direction of Clara's house.
Sometimes John wished he could do that. Don't get him wrong, John was a brave boy who stuck up for himself, but sometimes, he wished he could get away from all of it. After all, John was only 16.
"Wut're you lookin' at boy?" his father slurred at John from the couch he so gracefully fell upon.
John stood there, glaring and finally rolled his eyes and went to close his door, when his father ran to the him just before He could close it.
"Answer me when I'm talking boy!" his father grabbed John by his arms and pinned him to the ground.
"You're a sorry mistake for a man!" John spat the words out as if they were venom.
His father didn't even let John finish the sentence when he let his rage upon John. he went for the face the torso and neck muttering 'Someone.... Atta ... teach... you.. manners....' which of course was not at all hypocritical. not the faintest.
John's father looked down at his handiwork and left John laying down in the middle of the room. Johns body ached and John felt the blood running from his nose warm on his tongue. It tasted like rusting metal. 'Soon,' John thought, 'soon you'll be away from this wretched place and at that academy you applied at.'
That was the last thing that was in Johns head before he succumbed to the darkness.
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Okay so the story is in third person and I hope you like it so far. Please leave comments about the writing (I'm an American 9th grader, sorry if it's crappy) love you! -Luna
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