Hi guys its ElizabethUzumaki431 here I would like to take this time to explain to you guys why I stopped with my original version of Naruto's Sister. It wasent because I got board or couldn't think of ideas because that is not true. The reason I stopped was because I layed out each chapter and to me after reading the whole story it just didn't make sense. At first I loved the fact of not having Itachi kill his parents and fellow clan members but... then I got to thinking that the only reason that Sasuke drove himself to get stronger was the fact that he wanted revenge. Without that piece in the puzzle Sasuke has no drive to become as great as he is.
Another thing is you cant and I mean CANT have team seven without the annoying fangirl on the team I mean we got to keep Sasuke's ego big arnt i right. I mean Sakura can get annoying at times but she makes things more interesting . Another person that makes team seven team seven is Kakashi because without him the team wont wonder what is under his mask. Another thing that i'm changing is what Narutos sister looks like because if she has red hair and Naruto has blonde hair then wouldn't people start to wonder why they look like Minato and Kushina and put two and two together and just assume that they are the children of the fourth and his wife and we wouldnt want that now would we. I have decided that since Itachi Still kills his clan that Skylar wont be in the story til later.
I'm not saying that I'm fully getting rid of he it just means that she wont be introduced til a later chapter she wont be known from the start. Also I decided that this story is actually going to start not from the beginning but after the Zabuza saga and more towards the Chunin exams to get more into a new part that I will be incorporating that i wasent going to in the first place in the other story. That Is one thing that I wont tell you my lovely readers you will have to just figure that one out yourselves. Though I will tell you guys that what I am adding to the story will change the direction I was originally planning. Oh I know Im evil by changing the whole plot that I was going for but ... I think that this change will be good for my story.
If after this little explanation as to why i'm rewriting this story and making all of these changes in the story line that I had originally set up make you not want to read this story anymore than I understand. But please... give it a chance and if you still don't like it let me know because if i get enough people say that they originally liked the old version I would rename this story and try to continue the old version. But for now as of 3/28/17 Naruto's sister (Sasuke x Oc) (itachi x oc ) will be put on hold until determined other wise. I love all my readers and any future readers of my story's. I value the feedback that I get from my readers and I say that any feedback that I get is greatly considered and helps improve my story's more so more people read them.
I Thank You . Each and every one of my readers I thank you because If I dident have you readers than my story's would be nothing but a story with little meaning and for you readers i'm thankful because with out you guys i wouldnt improve. So again Thank You.
Til next time,
ElizabethUzumaki431
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Naruto's Sister (Rewrite)
FanfictionThis is a rewrite of Naruto's sister (sasuke x oc) (itachi x oc). There are several changes to the story due to the fact that to me it dident make sense. What I plan to do will be explained in the first chapter before I actually get into the story w...