So this is a new story I'm working on this is just a preview tell me what you think it would be a huge help
Cold that was all I could feel I don't know how it happened one minute I'm walking across the street the next I'm here "good evening young man" I turned the see a beautiful woman she had a hourglass figure long black hair reaching down to her middle back a tattoo of a skull on her right breast her clothing consistent of a long black dress high heels and a diamond skull neckless but the most a louring feature was her eyes the were as black as the night "what who where." I began to panic She chuckled it was beautiful and it made what left of what was left of made my heart skip a beat "to answer you questions your dead we'll sort of, I'm death and your in purgatory" light laughter still evident in her voice when she said purgatory I took a look around the world looked like a post apocalyptic city plants and building constantly decaying and reforming "hey underworld a nooby!" The woman now known as death said while snapping help fingers in my face...
So I get this is short but I just wanna know what you think before I continue writing this so tell me what you think thanks for reading the preview