Chains & Butterflys (MAJOR EDITING!)

Chapter 2- Loaded

OK GUY'S SO IVE BEEN WANTING TO EDIT THE FIRST FEW CHAPTERS IN THIS BOOK SINCE FOREVER SO HERE WE GO. WHEN I SAY EDIT I MEAN DELETE THE WHOLE CHAPT AND MAKE IT OVER SO THIS IS ALL NEW

Tia pov's

loaded... that was the first thought that came to mind as the sleek black limo pulled up and we were greeted by a grey marble drive way. fresh cut green grass invaded the lawn and , two pillars on each side held up the house.  from the distance I could count three large stone chimey's and thousands of windows my social worker told me they were rich but I how rich are we talking here?.

Luke noticed my reaction and smirked, "close your mouth a fly might go in".

I scolded "Not funny", Before he could comment a short plump women bursted through the huge double doors outside were we stood. As she got closer I could automatically tell she was Luke's mom. they shared the same honey blond wispy hair. and the same tan skin. "Oh, daring it's so nice to meet you" she beamed at me grinning from ear to ear like a fifth-teen year old who just seen one direction live in concert before pulling me in and crushing me to her . which brought curiosity into my mind, this lady was super young about 25, there was no way she could be his mom right?.

"CANT BREATH" I chocked gasping for air. quickly a set of hands reached out and pulled me out from her embrace. Luke's worried green eye's scanned quickly over my body" you good?" He breathed sheeesh what brought on the sudden worry I barely knew him. nodding I heard a sigh of relief "Im so sorry dear, I got a little excited" she blushed, embarrassed

"You think" Luke snapped still holding me back. I nodded him "Luke don't talk to you're mom like that" I scowled, and he said I was the rude one.

"How do you know I'm his mom?"

Wasn't it noticeable , they looked so alike. Luke's mom PRACTICALLY spit him out.. "It was just a guess , you guy's look alike". Luke's mom smiled "well, your'e a good guesser , im his mom unfortunately" she joked , i think..

"Yea whatever" Luke rolled his eye's but I could easily tell he was hurt.

"Dear will you give us a moment" she gestured towards Luke "Make you're self at home okay?" I nodded and scurried off, by the looks on Luke face I could tell he knew what the conversation was already about.

As I entered the breathtaking house. I smirked 'so pretty boy is a bad one'

SO THIS IS THE SECOND CHAPT. I KNOW IT'S SHORT BUT I HAD TO DELETE THE OTHER ONE BECAUSE I FELT LIKE IT WAS CRAPPY, BUT I THINK THIS IS WAY BETTER. THANKS TO ONE SPACIAL FAN THAT WARMED MY HEART I MAY RECONSIDER ENDING THE BOOK, MY FAMILY ALWAYS TAUGHT ME IF I START SOMETHING FINISH IT.... BUT I NEED YOU GUY'S HELP .WHEN I UPLOAD AND SAY COMMENT NOBODY DOES AND THAT HURT ME SO WHEN I SAW HER COMMENT I NEARLY DIED BECAUSE SOMEONE TOOK THERE TIME TO STOP AND LISTEN TO ME WHINE..

 SO THAT'S WHY THIS NEW CHAPPY IS DEDICATED TO 

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