INSECURE (AN ITERRACIAL LOVE STORY)

first chappie

"SHANTAY GET YOUR FATASS DOWN HERE" jamal yelled from down the stairs. I hurriedly slipped my earings on and ran down the stairs nearly falling in the black glossy pumps I wore. "Yes jamal" I said staring at him un patiently, I didnt have the chance to think before I felt a shock of pain On my cheek, I fell down and flinched when I hear a pop. He slapped me. "Bitch the fuck you talking to with yo damn aditude, are you forgetting where you are you worthless bitch now get the fuck up and apologise" jamal said behind clenched teeth, as soon as he stopped talking I tried to stand up only to fall down, my ankle was throbing, I looked up at jamal only to see him taping his feet impatiently.... shit, if I didnt get up soon I would go through hell. I grabbed a stair to aid me and stood up "im sorry jamal, im stupid and should obey you" I said and as every word left my mouth I wanted to yell "LIES LIES ALL LIES I HATE YOU" but unless I want to end up in a body bag..I'd rather not. "Good now go get the keys and make sure you dont forget anything" he said, I nodded obediently and ran to the kitchen where the keys sat on the island, I grabbed them and walked hurriedly to jamal trying my hardest to ignore the pain of my throbbing ankle. He snatched the keys and ruffly pushed me to the side as he waled out the front door, I caught up behind him locking the door to his house or as I liked to call it, the devils lair. In the car I fumbled with my dress tryning to make it look like I had just ironed it, I glanced over at jamal who was playing "Worst Behavior" by drake, I knew the song, and I really liked it "Remmber mutha fucka neve luhed us" he rapped, in my head I rapped along until I accidentally sang outloud "You no me" as soon as the lyric to the song escaped my lips jamal gave me a dirty look and with his freehand, back handed my lips "shut the fuck up whore" I held my now bleeding lips for a moment before apologizing to his ass. "Im sorry jamal, wont happen again" he smiled "good now clean yourself up you look stupid" I nodded once and grabbed some make up covering up the busted lip.

So guys shud I continue or naw