31. paradise and akira??

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by HHHona

by HHHona

A/n: feel free to skip this part.(kinda a rant?? Idk)
I'm considering dropping this due to umm I guess I feel kinda underappreciated? (I'm needy OK, deal with it) It surprisingly takes a lot of stress and time to write these (at least more than it should) and I feel like people still don't like it?so I'm considering deleting this book or dropping it, hope fully not but there's a chance.
I apologize if the story doesn't suit you, if you don't like something I write, just change it.(im sensitive and take things to heart when I shouldn't so feel free to critize me but please don't be mean/rude?) This story won't be fitting for everyone, so if you don't like an aspect feel free to think of it differently. I'm also sorry if there's a lack of updates and any errors I make, I'm still young (I'm almost 12 :D) and I'm yet to get better at English. (I'm sorry if I come out rude too, I'm very awkward she ^^" I swear I don't mean to come off that way)
If you read this far, thank you for taking the time out of your day to read and I hope your enjoying this book and having a lovely day~! ^^

BACK TO THE STORY ~~

Slowly you looked down, unsure of whether to go through the passage or not.
"Are you scared?" The blonde teased while a huge smirk appeared on his life pale face.You bolted your face up about to blurt out some rude combat but he spoke over you paralized you stood there as the male hugged you. "There's no need to be. I'm here if anything happens" you stared at him in awe."BUT DON'T GET ANY IDEAS! IM ONLY DOING THIS BECAUSE YOU'RE A WIMP AND TO FIND THE OTHERS" he pushed you away rather harshly.
"Ahahaha~" you chuckled, poking him slightly "Not to get any ideas eh?"
He grabbed your hands and walled to the passage while huffing and muttering under his breath. A smile of victory spread on your gentle face.
A flustered kitty can't do much can it?

*thump* you both slammed into something.
Something soft yet rough...
"EXCUSE YOU"
Yuri raged at the man.. You remembered him from earlier.
:0
You grabbed yurio, telling him to shut up. Pulling your best act you tried to act innocent, hoping the male could be of some help.

"Excuse me sir, but do you perhaps know where Akira went?She has short-ish caramel colored hair that's in a ponytail, and gray-ish eyes."

The unknown male chuckled.
He leaned very close to your face, his breath was ice cold and smelled like vanilla ice cream. He seemed not fazed, yet you were a blushing mess and - yurio? He was watching the entire scene unfold right in front of his eyes.

"Watch out, this..." He paused, " 'Akira' isn't who she says she is... And now she must pay the price." A sadistic smile stretched on his face as he let out a loud sadistic laugh. "Let's get out of here" yurio pulled you, unsettled by the strange man he started pulling you away.

"We will meet again in a long time... But for now call me unknown.. Who knows.. I might even take you to paradise."

Are the characters coming off as oc-ish? Please tell me ways I can improve ^^"