Illiterate Speech or Strange Wording?

Always by your side

A scene in Tokyo ESP has a character run away from the hospital because she has lost her powers and feels worthless. She runs away in only her hospital gown as it begins to rain heavily. My OC Trav finds her and speaks to her, wanting her to realize it will be alright no matter what. If his words got through. is only the matter of time.

Running away from your tears?

You are powerless, isn't that what you felt?

There is power still in you

Not in the special powers you were stolen of,

it is in your blood, the natural talents you were born with,

You can't see it now,

The pain and feeling of lose clouds it from view,

You will find it soon,

By night or day, it will find you,

Till then, i don you these clothes for the rain,

that hospital smock can do little in this time,

Till the time is right, i have to bid you adieu.

May the light find you,

and your light be the guide for you...

My dear friend, Rinka...