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'So...
Where should we head?'
Asked she,
Her eyes glowing.
Through her eyes,
I could see in her,
A sharp and keen brain.
She has made
Many naive men
Follow her, right?
She would definitely
Have a sharp brain.

'You died in the hospital,'
Said she.

'As you feel right.'

It seemed
As if she
Commanded
The leader
Of the seven
To head to
The hospital.

'Can we
Go back in time?'
Asked I.

She shook a No.

The air thrushed harder,
As the cart sped.

'A crime case, uh?'
Said she.
'Oh my Heaven,
I am excited.
A detective investigation!'

I laughed mildly.

'So,
Who is Holmes,
And who is Watson?'

'Haha,'
I laughed,
Jerking my heart.
'I shall be Watson;
As well as
The victim.'

'Oh,
Do I seem
So high in brain?'

'Well,
It really felt so.'

'Haha!
You will know
How mistaken you are.'

She continued,
After a small silence:
'That's extra exciting, right?
The victim itself
Is on pursuit
To find his murderer.
Wow! Wow! Wow!
First in my life.'

I accepted her
With a wide hearty smile.

Slowly, yet suddenly,
The white mist
Blended to a city,
And then,
Slowly, yet suddenly,
Appeared a hospital
To our sight.


Sooo.... Haha!
What are your thoughts in the procession of this? Help me continue the story... Presently, I am blank. 📖
Who killed him? Why? How? Cast your thoughts ... And help me... ❤

And, do you wish a name for the hospital...? If so, try suggesting.

I hope there are no suspenseful cliff hangers left in this chapter. I cared all your 'complaints' on the suspense of this work😂 , esp that of Ajay-Kumar
And, I care that only for this chapter. From 13 onwards, again it will end up over high cliffs.

DEDICATION
Ajay-Kumar

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