Betrayal Of Ash (Amourship) *re-working*

Ash's setup

ASH POV
I have a good idea of how to propose but I must keep it a secret but how am I supposed to tell her that I want to be alone? Then suddenly Serena gets a call. "Who is it" I ask, "it's my mother" Serena says happily. "she wants us to see her." I then tell her "how about I drive us there" She nods and grabs my hand and we get to the car. I start to drive while she guides me, After a 10 minute drive we got there and there is Serena's mom waiting for us. We both wave at her and Serena runs up to her and hugs her. I walk up to her and say "hello, nice to meet you ma'am" she responds with "you must be Ash and you can call me Grace" I nod happy. We go inside and Serena goes to the bathroom I then ask Grace"excuse me Grace is it OK if I m...a..rry Serena?" Grace Smiles and says "of course, she loves you and it in happy she is" I get up and ask "can you please buy me sometime I want to propose in a big way" she nods and I run out the door. Get In the car and go to a restaurant I reserve the best table they have. Then leave I then drive to a hill. I put Rose pedals everywhere, and Put two glass cups down on a carpet, then put a wine bottle in the middle and with the lighting of the moon it will be perfect place and now For a suit.
TIME SKIP
I found the perfect suit and I also found a dress for Serena a put in a bag and get in the car and start driving fast. I get home and run inside, I greet Serena and Grace and give the bag to Serena. I then say "please get ready Serena" I take a shower and Serena does the same. I look at Serena for a second and stare she blushes and say "Ash stop staring its embarrassing" I then respond with "I can't you are to beautiful to stop staring at" She blushed again and I hold my arm out, She clings to me and we get to the car. I look at her again admiring her beauty and she says "Enough about me you look amazing" I look at her and respond with "not as amazing as you I can't keep my eyes off you" She blushed and kisses my cheek I smile and She puts her head on my shoulder. I take one of my hands off the wheel and hug her. I swear I'm the luckiest man on earth to have her. And I will always choose her over everything she is my Family and always will, I love her.
I hold Serena's hand and tell her "I love you and always will" we start kissing passionately. Come on Serena this will be the best night of our lives.
To Be Continued...