At Winter's Edge (Draft) (BoyxBoy)

Teaser- "Love Hurts"

(Reviewed V2)

-by: Luca

I'm sorry I took so long to make this, life's been tough, and I've had a lot of issues with school and such, until about April, the updates will be super slow as I'm preparing for exams, please forgive me.

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June 13th, 2009

I always thought the words "I love you." To be true, little did I know they were nothing but a lie, a false promise given to those desperate enough to fall for it. I was one of those people, I fell for it, hook line and sinker.

The pencil led broke as it hit the dirty, tear-stained paper, tired of it's users abuse. "Fuck these cheap pencils." a pained voice said, it was faint, and as harsh as the words were no one would hear them, no one cared enough too.

After minutes of sawing away at the broken lead, a new, finely sharpened one took it's place, and pencil hit paper once again.

Love is fickle, a sharp, double-edged sickle, some would say love is kind, I would say they have lost their mind, love is evil, love hurts, love is bi polar, love flirts, but the moment you've been used, can't take anymore to love you're nothing but dirt.

Tears dripped from his face, and crashed onto the paper. "Why me, why me." his lips uttered with no sound to go with them.

What did I do to deserve this? What horrible, disgusting, twisted thing would warrant such a thing to happen to me? What person would want to put me through this? To push me over the ledge?

You'll have to find out, on "Winter's edge."

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I feel better about this.... Though it isn't as good as I imagined I hope you can enjoy
*Cries in a corner and hides* Until next time