Dark Forces Near

Shatterpoint

Pov: Dawn

Agh, my head started to hurt again. I opened the door to my suite. I sat on the bed and that's when I felt the sharp pain in my chest again. Thoughts of my mother struck me again. No.

"Uh... ma'm someone would like to see you," said an officer.
"Ugh fine let 'em in," I answered

"Dawn!" That voice. I know that voi-
"Ryder how'd you get here?" I asked
"You have to come back! Your mother is in a not-good-condition," WHAT!!! No-aaaahh.
"That's nice Ryder," I said, "it's too bad," I stated sipping some caf.
"What! Dawn!"he yelled shaking me." This is not you!"
"Well it is now," I said "Why did you leave?" He asked me.oh no... I thought
"You wanna know why I left Ryder? Do you really?" I said while stepping towards him until he reached the wall and we were standing so close we could hear each other breathing.
"Do you?" I said again.

Pov:Ryder

"The reason I left was because you guys kept hurting me over and over again. I got sick of it!" she stated. "I was hurt. Oh-and Mio..." she started then scoffed,"that piece of scum- that-that slimo, was just so annoying and she..... UGH!!!" She yelled and threw her cup against the wall.
"I couldn't take it anymore Ryder," she mumbled. "I'm so sick of it. I need someone-someone here with me, someone I know. But it can't happen," she said quietly.
"I have everything here I could want and need,"
"Yeah I can see that," I said gazing around the enormous suite.
"It's all yours. Just join me and it can happen,"
"Dawn no, I can't you have to come back!" I pleaded.

Pov:Dawn

"No! I can't Ryder!" I said. "Please Ryder! I-I can give you anything! Except me coming "home" and you betraying me. Anything else-I'll give it," I tried to persuade him.
Please,please,plea-
"Fine! Deal then," he said. Yes! I thought.
"Anything you want... 11th Brother..."

Pov:Lux

"Where is Ryder!" my twin sister exclaimed" I'm scared Lux! He could be dead!"
"Well then we'll have to go look for him!" I said.
"Fine! Just if we get killed... I'm blaming it on you!"

Star Destroyer Ultimatinume

As soon as we arrived on the Star Destroyer, we found Ryder immediately. But, something was off with him.
"Ryder!" Luxa exclaimed.
"Luxa!"Ryder said. "Boy am I glad to see you!"
"Me too" Luxa said. She tried to give him a hug but he backed away."Ryde-AAAHHH" she screamed.
"NOOOOOOOO!!!" I screamed as Ryder stabbed her with a red blade.
Ryder deactivated his lightsaber and Luxa gasped as he did. He left the room with me and Luxa and a bloody mess.
"Luxa? Luxa WAKE UP!LUXA!!!" I sobbed "NOOO!" I sniffed."Luxa!"
She's gone. She's gone-forever

I carried her back into our ship.
No Luxa

Pov:Dawn

"Very good 11th Brother," I said. "Now was that fun?" I asked.
He took a sip of Caf and answered, "Very. I never understood why everyone says the Empire is horrible,"
"Yes, I do agree,"I said, "I do agree..."

Notes:Wow I really don't have much to say, but join me on the next chapter: All Is Lost and thx🤗
             Sorry about the death of Luxa and I forgot to mention that Luxa was a Jedi Padawan...