Loud Tales Spinoffs

Chapter 9: The Big BBQ

  "Looks like everything's in order" Lynn Sr. said as he checked off everything for the big BBQ party.
"We good, pops" Luna asked.
"That's a yes, Luna" Lynn Sr. answered.
"Sweet. Here's the guest list" Luna said as she handed her dad the lengthy guest list.
"Wow. That's a lot. I'd better get a lot more supplies" Lynn Sr. said as he got in Vanzilla and drove off to the store.
Meanwhile, BJ and Luan were spending some nice quality time together.
"I bet I can win" he said as he and Luan were playing Super Smash Bros. Melee.
"Oh please. Everyone knows that Link is the best fighter in the game" Luan replied.
After the match, she won.
"Wow. Oh well. We got plenty of time before the big BBQ" BJ said.
"Yep. I actually have a huge surprise for Leni" Luan said as they went upstairs.
"Oh really? What is it" BJ asked.
"I called the Umarak Army and they agreed to let Josh come over for this BBQ" Luan answered.
"Oh great. Him" BJ replied.
"Hey! Don't badmouth your bro" Luan said as she slapped him.
"Ow. Okay. I won't" BJ said.
"Good. Now let's help dad get ready" Luan replied.
"Hey kids" Lynn Sr. said as they came outside
"Hey dad. Need any help" Luan asked.
"Not at the moment. I just got back from the store" Lynn Sr. replied.
A few moments later, the first few guests arrived.
"Hey Bobby. Hey Ronnie Anne. Hey Clyde" Lincoln said as he answered the door.
"Hey Linc" they all said at the same time.
"The BBQ is in the backyard" Lincoln replied.
Just as Clyde walked in, his two dads, Howard and Harold McBride followed close behind him.
"Are you excited Clyde" Harold asked.
"Sure am, dad" he answered.
"Fantastic" Howard replied.
Just then, more guests arrived.
"I'll get it" Leni said as she went downstairs.
When she answered the door, she was surprised to see her husband has come to visit.
"OH MY GOSH! JOSHIE! I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU CAME" she said as she gave him a hug.
"Yeah. Luan called the commander of my army to allow me to visit" Josh replied.
"Cool. Now let's have some fun" Leni said as she took her flip flops off.
"Alright" Josh said as he tickled his wife's feet.
"HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. This is fun" she said as her husband tickled her feet.
"Good" Josh replied.
Just then, the doorbell rang again.
"BJ, can you get that" Rita asked.
"I'm on it" he said as he opened the door.
He was shocked to see Shenzi again.
"Am I dreaming" he asked.
"Nope. It's me. The one. The only. Shenzi Tuck" Shenzi answered.
"Wow. It's great to see you again" BJ replied.
"Thanks. I hitched a ride with Sheena, Mika, Alex, Jenna, Dana, Ashley and Ayanna" Shenzi said as she and the others followed BJ to the backyard.
Once everyone had arrived, Lynn Sr., Howard and Harold were hard at work on the grill making sure everything was going smoothly while everyone else was off doing their own thing while they waited for the burgers and hot dogs to be done.
"Oh Bobby Boo Boo Bear. I love you so much" Lori said
"Same here, babe" Bobby replied.
Meanwhile, BJ and Luna were busy making out in Smooch City.
"You're such a good kisser, honeypot" he said.
"Thanks. So are you, love" Luna replied.
A few minutes later, Jenna and Luxie came up to them.
"Hey Jenna. Where's ALT" BJ asked.
"She's got a terrible cold. The good news is that she's able to cure herself. Even in human form" Jenna answered.
"Oh. I hope she gets better" BJ replied.
Meanwhile, Mika and Alex noticed Shenzi.
"Do you see what I see, sis" she asked.
"Ya mean that girl with the hyena-ish appearance" Mika replied.
"Yeah. Let's go see if she's ticklish" Alex said.
"Good idea" Mika said as they went up to her.
"Hello. Who are you" Shenzi asked.
"I'm Alexandria Marie Wallace Jr. But you can call me Alex" Alex answered.
"And I'm her younger sister, Mika Louise Wallace" Mika added as she introduced herself to Shenzi.
"Nice to meet you. I'm Shenzi Tuck" Shenzi replied.
"Okay. Now that we've introduced ourselves, we have a question for you" Alex said.
"Alright. What is it" Shenzi asked.
"Are you ticklish" Mika asked.
"Yes. On my sides, under my arms and my belly button" Shenzi answered.
"Perfect. Now onto the tickling" Alex said as she started tickling Shezi's sides without warning.
"HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. THAHAHAHAHAHAHAHT TICKLES" she said as she laughed.
Just then, Ashley jumped in as well.
"Oh you're ticklish, are you" she asked.
"YES. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. I AM" Shenzi answered.
"Good. I just found my target" Ashley said as she tickled Shenzi's belly button.
"HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. THIS IS TORTURE" she said as she continued laughing.
After a while, the burgers and hot dogs were finally done.
"Wow. They took a little while longer to grill than usual but they came out great" Harold said.
"Yeah. But they'll be really great, Hair Bear" Howard added.
"Kids, it's time to eat" Rita said as everyone huddled around the picnic tables.
"Wow Mr. Loud. This is one great burger" Shenzi said as she took a bite.
"I'm glad ya like it, Shenzi" Lynn Sr. replied.
"Yeah. They taste like a dream" Sheena added.
After a while, Lily ripped one in her diaper.
"Poo-poo" she said.
"Uhhhh.... Somebody please change her before our food starts to smell like her poop" Josh said.
"I'll do it" Rita said as she took Lily in the house.
A while later, Cristina showed up.
"Hey. Sorry I'm late. I was debating on how to surprise BJ" she said.
"Oh yeah? You don't surprise me" BJ replied.
"How bout this" Cristina said as she put a foam knife to his belly.
"Okay. That was surprising" he said as he noticed Cristina's foam knife.
Later on, Ayanna tried tickling Dana.
"Tickle tickle" she said as she tickled Dana's belly.
"HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. Nice try Ayanna" she said.
"Awwww. Are you ticklish" Ayanna asked.
"No. HAHAHAHAHAHA. Okay. I am" Dana answered.
As the sun set, the BBQ was over and everyone gathered upon the roof to watch it.
"This was really fun" BJ said as Sheena held his hand.
"Yeah. Good food. Good times and of course great weather" Sheena replied.
"Yep. It was all great" BJ replied
"Of course it was" Luxie added