hey im new here and this is my first story so plz vote and comment!! :D
also here are the links so that you can see what the characters are suppose to look like:
Chrystee: http://images.inmagine.com/img/photoalto/paa367/paa367000047.jpg OOOOR http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3084/3335790836_e6c75dbc0c.jpg
Tristan (ghost boy): http://media.photobucket.com/image/teen%20skater%20boy/ardypants626/Jared.jpg OR http://www.menshairstyles.net/d/35107-2/Teen+men+hairstyle+with+long+bangs_fashion+hairstyle.jpg
i cant decide which pic for the characters so please help!!!
thnx guys lubb u all!! <3
~Corii~
Chapter 1
Its was dark, about 3:00 am I think. I've always been the adventurous type; plus, I thought 'what could happen?'. I found out that waking up at three so you can explore your new house isn't the best idea. The problem was that after that I couldn't stop. So I'll take it from the top. You'll see what I mean...
"Okay, why do we have to move?" I asked. You can tell my mom is fed up with it, since it's like the fifth time I ask. I know I'm annoying the crap out of her, but that's what she gets for making us move. "Chrys, honey you know the store manager job in Bakersfield pays better." "How much better?" "I can earn as much as 45,000. I would be crazy to turn that down!" "But if your jobs in Bakersfield, why do we have to move to Onyx?!". The thing about Onyx: its small. Its dusty. The temperature can go, like, over 90 (maybe I'm exaggerating. Whatever). Anyway, enough said. "Chrys..." Mom say's (my real name is Chrystee, but everyone calls me Chrys) "you haven't even been there yet. Give it a chance" "yeah that's what people always say. Whatever mom". I stomp of to my room. Fantastic isn't it. Just dandy. Apparently my mom absolutely adores ruining my life. I grab my slide-out blue phone and look up my best friend in the contacts (gah, 'contacts'. Why couldn't they call it buddies or something). I punch in her number and let it ring awhile, but she doesn't pick up. Well. That's weird I think. My best friend Belle (short for Adibelle) is a TOTAL phone addict! Seriously its texting and calling 24/7 with that girl, especially her boyfriend (nudge nudge, wink wink). So I go to my new laptop. She's a Facebook addict to; yeppers right on the top of my chatting list it says ~Smexi<3Belle~. Definitely her. I open the chat window:
<Mizz_Chryz>: Belle! ur not gonna believe what just happened!! :O
~Smexi<3Belle~: what?! Don't tell me the sale off that dress from 4ever 21.!!
<Mizz_Chryz>: W.O.R.S.E.
~Smexi<3Belle~: :O:O:O.!
<Mizz_Chryz>: im moving 2 Cali! (
~Smexi<3Belle~: O_O.! NOOOO.!!!!! U CANT MOVE.!
<Mizz_Chryz>: try that on my mom. >(
<Mizz_Chryz>: im moving in 2 days
~Smexi<3Belle~: ( ( ( im coming over 2morrow
<Mizz_Chryz>: k, thnx. Bye.!
I log out and close my laptop. That was so depressing. But at least I don't have to worry about passing it on; Belle will take care of that, no doubt about it. So I sit down to listen to 'Remember the name'. Because what else can I do?
