Winter's Revenge

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Author: DeadOfTheNight103

Cover: I personally like the simplicity of the cover chosen, however due to how little setting is involved in the story, there could be better options. All in all I rate cover 9/10

Setting: 7/10 however its not necessarily important to the story, its just an aspect that can be better utilized.

Writing skills: I honestly love this writers skills, they do a good job with grammar and keep the reader focused on the stories big picture. This book is one in which you can definitely feel like you're watching movie instead of reading. There are a few parts that could use revision, but besides those spots its very good. 8/10

General format: some paragraphs tend to get a bit lengthy and could be broken up better, most readers dont like a huge wall of text. Also, there are some punctuation placement mistakes, only minor ones. In total I rate format 8/10

Review: all i've really got to say about it is, its a good book. There are only two chapters up at the moment, but it is well worth the read and wait for the update.

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