AN: before u criticize me for this crappy unfinished story... I was going thru my old notebooks and journals and I found my 4th grade writing portfolio and this story was in it so I thought I'd post it for my own enjoyment. This is unedited and I really want to go back and edit it but I can't
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"Gotta get the GIGANTIC bone," is what I'm saying, but "ruff, ruff! Eeeek! RRUUUFFFF!" Is all they here. As you can guess, I'm a dog.
So, it was Thanksgiving and the pale, sundried tomato had come to let me out of my cramped, green, funless cage. I felt like giving him a big puppy kiss because he let me out, well, that and the fact that he looked like the best sundried tomoto, Ever! But I, had no time. So I made a B line straigt to the dinning room. Suddenly I remembered about the two miles per hour speed limit, "that goes for dogs too" says the not as pale sundried tomato. "And if you get caught going any faster I'll slow you down to point two MPR!" That's also one of her famous quotes. While not so pale was ocupyed, I ran on my tiptoes past her,doggie wiggled under the table and waited for the bone to tumble to that wood/tile type flooring. Then, I made my move!
The next day, everything was back to normal. The pale mail waliking stick took me to the big green humongus space by the house. I had mad a hole for my bone erarlyer that morning. I scurried inside, snatched the bone from Hideout 14, then using the trail I had made I raced back. I dropped the bone in it's bed and tucked Boney in. After Boney was safe and secure I decided to play a game of Chase my Tail. You run around in a circle and bolt after your Tail. I idolize that game. Then the chubbly tan ball toddled over and bounced on my back. I bucked her off of me and went to go find my bone. Chase my Tail worked up and apitite for me. But, when I went to find Boney, I relized something, He's lost! I ran around digging holes but it was hopeless. I felt like a big dumb squirll. The biggest and the dumbest squirll EVER! Wahhh wahhh!
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All I have to say is I bet I never failed a test on vivid verbs.
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stuff my teachers thought were notes lol
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