Hello everyone! Firstly I'd like to thank my English teacher for this inspiring idea. Well, he just came up with the first part where the cake was destroyed by Mabel's younger brother, Max.
This was actually my English composition exam question. I received the highest mark, 58.5/60, beating the cleverest student in class by 0.5 points. It sounds ridiculous but it meant a lot to me as a not-so-clever student. I was also on 11 years old at that time.
My teacher said that it was such a sweet and touching story to be written by an 11 year old kid. He was a hard-to-impress kind of teacher. It felt like a really huge achievement as he read out my story in front of the class and literally saluting me in front of everyone.
Since then, I love compositions and writing stories. Which when I tell my friends and family, they'll glare at me weirdly.
I'm sure there might be a lot of mistakes especially in terms of grammar. I'm still learning to improve myself with that and also my vocabulary.
I'd read my pocket distionary for fun to pick up new words but, I tend to forget them immediately. It's harder than I thought it would be to expand my vocabulary knowledge.
Do comment on the paragraphs if there's any mistakes and such and I'll be great if you explained it to me why it should be that way so I wouldn't repeat the same mistakes.
I'm not so sure what my next book will be. I have 3 books in queue. I'm not sure to start with which one.
I don't know if i'll be posting any time soon. Currently preparing for a big exam. I'm still in procrastination mood. Need to break this bad attitude soon.
Thank you for reading my story. I hope it wasn't too cliché-y. Hope you'll be reading my next one too!
Have a great day you awesome human being. Keep reading and never stop reading books/wattpad!
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The Fallen Cake
Historia CortaIt's Dad's 46th birthday. What do you think of when someone mentions the word birthday? For me, it's a cake. I'm going to make one for him. Let's hope it turns out good.
