the ride home And Other Short Stories

roler coaster

This is a re-upload of an old story. Hope you like
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We where on holiday in weyleg. At the new theam park. There was only 3 rides. The dodgems, the cloud nine baby train and the epic chainsaw. Its seats move round a chainsaw shape,hence the name, progresivly speeding to 5 g-force. At the moment of 5 g-force it goes round once then abrubtly stops befor slowly mooving one at a time to get off. There are pads on all sides exept below you , in front of you and above you. Theres nouthing infront of you exept the air and other carts. We where in line. About 39. People infront of us. The ride holds 40. So i was going on with out my parents. It will be fine. What if the cart flyes off, what if you smash into anougher cart.all things that went through my head as the line started mooving l. I started trembeling "john ryder, you are not to be scared" my mother said. I was encoraged and carried on. We sat down and buckled down. A man in his late 30's sat next to me. I didnt see mutch of him as the paddings stopped my view of him. We started quie slow as the ride booted up. There was a gringing comeng from the "booth" next to me. I figured thats where the weals where. We started gaining speed. We only just came to the curve of the blade. Looking down i could see the cloud nine ride. It was so slow it didnt look like it was mooving. Therevwas a clunk. The cart sped up pushing me to the back of my seat. We sped towards the tunnal in the handel of the chainsaw. Thats when i heard anouther clunk. This time it was metalic. We came out of the tunnal. There was a scream. Blood sped past my face. Then a knife. The ride stopped. I was upsidedown. I heard a shout. "Grenade". There was a bang on the bottem of my chair i leaned forward to see the man,to get comfort,he smiled at me then laughed. He unbuckled him self and fell as the grenade exploded. He hit the floor in a splater. I was in a thousand peices. The raideo explained the events of the day that night. I didnt hear it ovcorse but it would of said "and today following the break out at weylegs assylem. The convicts robbed a wepon store and headed to weyleg theampark. 21 of the 23 borded the chain saw and wreeked havok killing not only the 21 convicts but 19 inocent people. The 2 remaining convicts where caught lining up for the ride. The two ryders where put back in custordy."