Saved Max and Harvey fanfic [COMPLETED]

Chapter 4

Pic of Gabe

Makayla's pov

I walked in the door and I seen an intruder. Ok what to do. "Hey Makayla!"  he said so excited. Ahhhhhh he knows my name. I pulled my pepper spray out. "Who are you" I questioned. "Um your father" he said. I went soft and gave him a big hug. Well I jumped on him. "Woah your light as a feather what do you eat" he asked. I jumped down. "Nothing she starves me everyday how did you even get here" I asked.

"I begged your mom if you can live with me" he asked. "And" I said. "She said no" he said. "But I have visitation rights because I do have half of the custody" he said. "But what about school" I asked. "School is almost over kiddo don't you get out June uhhhh 13th am I right" he said. "Yup" and it was May 26th so much for "almost" out of school. "Oh was all" I said "if she abuses you again I want you to call the cops ok" he said. I shook my head.

"I'll take you today because it's a weekend but pack some clothes" he said. I packed clothes for the weekend and I honestly don't know if this is my father or not I'm just trying to find a way to get out of here. "Ready" he asked as I walked downstairs. I shook my head.

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"Okay I need you to be nice as possible and I think your capable of doing that" he said while touching my arm. "I also have a 12 year old son" he said. "Okay" I said. Step brother or no? Nah. I got out the car and walked into the slightly big house. It smelt good. Well I mean it did smell better than my house. "Your bedroom is the third door on your left"he said. Wow this was beautiful and big. I really didn't do anything but just go to sleep after that.

In the morning......

I woke up and took a shower and put on jean shorts and a hot pink competitive cheerleading championship shirt. Don't ask why. I put on socks and my black low top vans. I kept my hair out. I walked downstairs to an unfamiliar smell of breakfast because I honestly haven't had a full on breakfast since last year I think. "Well who is this hottie" asked the boy that was sitting on the couch. "Gabe this is my daughter Makayla, Makayla this is my son Gabe" said my father. This kid can't be 12.

I guess I went shy mode on everyone here. Gabe immediately got up. "Your hot can I get your number" he asked. "Um I guess" I said. This was only because he was adorable even though we are 2 years apart. He put his number in my phone. "Okay um after breakfast do you want to go to the mall with Gillian and Gabe" asked my father. "Who's Gillian" I asked.

"My wife" he said. "Oh" I replied.

Breakfast was amazing. The pancakes were so fluffy and the bacon was amazing. The orange juice was just as good as the bacon and th- wait do I sound like a homeless person who finally had food in 5 years. I went back upstairs to watch tv waiting for Gillian to come home from work. While watching tv I got a text from Max.

Max😊: hey Makayla are you feeling better today?

Me: yes

Max😊: that's great so what are you doing

Me: about to go to the mall with my dad's girlfriend and her son

Max😊: you ditched us for them how rude

Me: Max I'm sorry this was unexpected I didn't know and plus my mom wasn't home when I came home so my father came.

Max😊: chill Makay I was just joking

Me: oh

Max😊: I'll talk to you later then

Me: okayyy

Max😊: bye

Me dating a 12 year old isn't creepy at all right. I mean come on does he even look 12? Okay just a little. Nah this is the only way I could get a boyfriend. By dating a 6th grader while I'm in 8th. "Makayla" said Gabe. "Yes" I said while taking another sip of my strawberry banana smoothie.

"My mom hasn't came yet can we just start walking I'm getting bored" he said as he took off his hat and combed his hair with his hands then put the hat back on. I got up and pushed my chair in. You little hottie..... "Can you hold my hand I see my ex with another guy she's coming our way" he said while looking straight ahead. "Where" I said while looking around.

"I will throw a temper tantrum" he said. "Fine" I said while grabbing his hand and intertwined our fingers.

I've been holding his hand for 1 hour. "Gabe why am I still holding your hand" I asked. That's because I don't have an ex" he said while casually adjusting his hat and looking looking at his phone. "You little a- hey Cinderella" said a familiar voice. I turned around facing the wrong person at the wrong time.

Hannah Everly the worst person you could ever mess with. She has thick blonde curly hair and cold blue eye that show all the evil inside. "Hey Hannah" I said in a shy voice. "So who's this your boyfriend" she asked. "Yes" I said without stuttering and grabbing Gabe's hand.

"Do you guys kiss" she asked. I looked at Gabe. Stupid kid texting stupid friends on his stupid phone at the stupidest time the stupidity shows straight through his stupid little stupid 6th grader self. Woah I said stupid a lot. "Gabe ,baby I think my dad is calling" I said while pulling him out of Victoria's Secret.

Yes we were in Victoria's Secret only because Gabe has a perverted mind but a cute face so yeah it would be easy to convince someone with a face like that. "Gabe are you okay" I asked. "No" he said while crying. "Can you kiss my bo bo" he asked. I started laughing. "I don't know Gabe it depends where it is" I said. He pointed to his lips. "Nice try Gabe" I already fell for your first trick" I said while walking away.

We stood at the entrance of the mall waiting for my dad. "Sorry kiddos we got caught up were not going to be home tonight we'll be back tomorrow sorry she didn't show up" said my father as he got out the car and opened my door.

Are the chapters too short I feel like I should make them longer I normally stop at 1000 or 1100 I can make them longer....