A Young Mind

The Voice 2.0

Monday 29th October 2007

Write a build-up

'Wow' Nevera said breathlessly standing stationary in front of the secret door. What should she do now? Nevera took a step forward and leaned on the door's enterance which was now getting smaller. Nevera peered into the darkness.

          "Anybody there?" she called. No reply.

Suddenly, a scaly figure came out and grabbed her.

          "Ahhh!" she screamed with all her might. Nobody seemed to hear her. Nevera thought it was the end of the world as the creature dragged her down into the depths of the secret door which seemed like water.

          "Helllooo?" mumbled Nevera nervously at the creature. But the only reply was a growl and the creature continued to drag her into nothingness.

           "Hello child" came a voice from nowhere.

           "Who are you?" Nevera shook.

           "That is not important, however, whats important is that I know you!" the voice replied.

Hurry think of something, Nevera, you got to get back home, she told herself.

            "Oh please I didn't want to come here at the first place!" she told, the voice which seemed to belong to a woman.

           "You have a mission here and you must do it!" she declared.

            "But it was not my choice." Nevera remarked.

            "But, but, but, I don't care about your buts, you must do it, our lives depend on you!" the voice came back.