Camp camp - a story based on the role plays with my friends

Chapter one- New beginings

      Beep beep beep the clock kept ringing, I quickly got up and turned off the clock. Today was going to be my first day of camp. I changed and brushed my teeth, walking to the dining room, my mom's back was turned while she was making breakfast " Hun are 'Yu' ready for you first day of camp?! " She asked happily " Of course! " I said politely " Also mom, dont use my name like that " she looked at me "of course I'm sorry" she turned off the stove and put the plate of food down " Eat up quickly, I'm going to get ready " I nodded, I have been looking forward to this for a while, and actually has made me excited the moment I woke up. I ate my breakfast quickly and went to the garage waiting for my mom. After 2 minutes she came over and said excitedly "okay, let's do this!" She opened the car and we both got in. We were a bit late but that didn't really matter until we were actually in the camp. We parked near the entrance and I brought out my bag, I take a deep breath before walking out of the car, my mom also came out of the car and hugged me she said with a stern face " listen, I want you to behave" I replied quickly "yes, I will!" Her expression calmed down "thank you" she kissed me on my forehead "I love you!" She walked into her car, and before closing the door I said "I love you as well!" She closed her car door and I saw her drive off. I turned around and stared at the huge sign that read ' CAMP CAMP ' I Walked slowly to the entrance, and there was a counselor wearing a huge red sweatshirt "welcome" he said unenthusiastically. "Follow me!" He walked to the camp showing me around, "and this is our mess hall!" He pointed " we do a lot of stuff in here, mostly eating" he opened the doors and I looked at what was happening inside, I was astonished, kids were going out of control and a counselor was in the corner crying to himself, for a second I thought this was a dream, but after being pushed in and seeing the whole room to its full extent, I realized it wasn't.

--for readers-- if I made any typos or didn't have anything you liked in this story please tell me, all of your opinions count in making a great story

--for friends-- guys I'm super tired and I have to draw about how the mess hall looks crazy... I'm too determined for this book