Title: Drowned
Author: TheImperfectLife
Genre: Horror, Murder, Revenge, Suspenseful
Cover: OMG, it's beautiful, but I don't like how I have to squint to see your name.
Summary: I like it, but are you saying that the lake has a curse? In which the curse brings people back to life? You should say a little bit about the curse.
Chapter 1; Drowning: Everything is good. Sentence flow, grammar, and descriptions.
"I could never do what he once did."
"The moon reflected off the still lake giving off a shimmer of light."
Chapter 2; Bad to Worse: This is the most suspenseful story I've ever read.
Chapter 3; Safe?: Don't forget to tell us who POV it is. Sorrow and grief is basically the same thing.
Is the 'Another life' a legit another life? Or a flashback?
Chapter 4; Somewhere Over The Rainbow: Again POV. Oh, SNAP!!
Chapter 5; You Shouldn't Have Done That: POV again. WHAT!!!
Overall rate: 4 💙💙💙💙
Besides your summary and the little things I pointed out above and in the comments; your story is golden. It's so suspenseful and intriguing.
Rating Scale: Rate from 1-5
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1: Poor/Needs MAJOR editing
2: Almost there/ needs fixing/need practice
3: Good/Needs a little editing
4: Good/Needs a little editing/may recommend/may read on
5: EXCELLENT/will recommend to followers, friends/may read on
