Title: Mirage
Author: LK_XOXO
Genre: Teen Fiction, Romance, Humor
Cover: LOVE IT.
Summary: Like your summary. To me it's a little too much info.
Prologue: I agree with another fellow member, your Prologue is not really necessary.
Chapter 1: At the beginning of the chapter you should say Months later since Luna then made friends.
Sentences I'm confused about:'Reminded of Ed Sheeran's Photograph? Well, I am.'
Overall rate: 4 💙💙💙💙
Overall it's good. I see potential as it already has. I don't know how I feel about the break of the fourth wall though...
Rating Scale: Rate from 1-5
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1: Poor/Needs MAJOR editing
2:Almost there/ needs fixing/need practice
3: Good/Needs a little editing
4:Good/Needs a little editing/may recommend/may read on
5: EXCELLENT/will recommend to followers, friends/may read on
