Aadhe Adhure - the incomplete desire...This is my first story hope u guys like me ..
Characters of story ..
Sanskar- A hard-working man... He is 21 year old and loves his wife a lot. His world starts and end on his wife. He always wants his wife to be happy..
Swara - sanskar's wife... She is very confused personality. Loves her hubby .age -20
Sahil - SANSKAR'S best friend. He has a crush on swara. He frequently used to meet swasan ..
Lucky - SANSKAR'S brother.
Ragini- lakshaya wife. Sshe doesn't like swara.
Plot..
Sanskar's POV
So finally after 5 weeks I was returning to my home, to my shona. It was very hard to pass these 5 weeks without her. I was badly missing her and I knew her condition would be same. But this work was also important. I didn't informed Her about my arrival.. I wanted to give her a surprise. She always wanted a sweet home.. And I didn't tell her that I had saved money for our house.. The Construction work also started. I would give her surprise... When our dream house would be completed.
I still remember the first day when, I saw her in school. I just passed out 10th she was new in school .. The Most beautiful girl I have seen. Every boy wanted her to be his girlfriend. I was little bit shy. But thanks to my chemistry teacher who made us partner in project. I started spending time with her... We started falling for each other.. But I got shocked when I found out that Sahil, also liked her. On our farewell party , Sahil mixed alcohol in her drink. Thanks to him because of this, she kissed me in front of whole school... 😍
Situation became worse after that, when our parents got to know about it. I saw her after a week in the hospital, like me she was badly beaten by her parents.. He swelled Cheeks, marks of belt on her hands... I couldn't able to tolerate it. And we decided to elope. After that we got married.. My bro helped me a lot... But Ragini don't know Y she was against our marriage.. Leave her
Finally I reached, it was raining outside... I was fully drenched... I knocked the door.. It was more than 5 minutes. I was getting panicked 😨.." Is she alright.? " I called her she was not attending my calls. I cried out " .. Jaan ".. Finally she opened the gate ..
I immediately hugged her " jaan r u OK .. "
" I'm perfectly alright hubs." She smiled😊
"Where were u, I was very much scared ". I enquired .
" hubs woh I.. "
" jaan u are fully drenched. U were in the terrace "
" ya hubs... " she placed her head on my chest " I was badly missing u "
"Me too jaan. " I looked towards her Rosy lips... My wife is looking dam hot in wet sari." I touched her cheeks... And placed my other hand on her waist. She closed her eyes I was about to kiss him
" hello guys .. " Sahil came towards us with a smiling face.
" what r u doing in my house, at this time? " I noticed he was coming from terrace. He was also fully wet.
"hubs, He came here to meet u " she explained
" ya Sanky, it's too late meet u tomorrow " he left ..
After dinner... We went to our room. She wore a black nighty... She was standing before mirror... Combing her hair.. I hugged her from back... And Slightly removed her hair . " u r looking too hot "
"thanks for the compliment hubs " she smiled ..
I started kissing in her neck.. She was also loosing her control... But she immediately stopped me
" what happened jaan, it's so many days.. We were far from each other.. Today I want to make love with u "
" not now hubs. I'm very much tired... " she said and then laid down to her side..
This was the first time she denied me. But I found something fishy when I saw Sahil, in my house his smile was saying that he was also in the terrace...,, no no sanskar how can u think this about swara .. U know for u she left her family. I looked towards her... She was looking like an angel.. I couldn't bear this Sahil any more. Only tolerating him because he is the owner of our house... Moreover he helped me in my hard time... But I can't deny the fact that he had a crush on my wife. Although he said now he moved on but I couldn't believe in him. As our dream house would be completed I'll take my jaan with me.
I kissed her cheeks " good night jaan "
I slept hugging her ...😍😍😍
Guys this is my first attempt.. Please encourage me.. If u like this. . only then I'll continue it.. Your lovely friend nilu ..😊
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FanfictionThis is my first story hope u guys like me .. Characters of story .. Sanskar- A hard-working man... He is 21 year old and loves his wife a lot. His world starts and end on his wife. He always wants his wife to be happy.. Swara - sanskar's wife... Sh...