[ summary ]
It's the 200th Hunger Games, and the Quarter Quell is all about directly punishing the families the Capitol despises the most. When an under aged and under trained District One girl finds herself in the arena because of a mistake her ancestors made... Who's to say she'll make it out alive?
[ review ]
Title: In This Together
Author: emmalynn22
Ratings 1-10: 7,5
Ongoing/completed: completed, sequel is Fuelling The Flames. :)
Opinion: I've watched the Hunger Games so I was able to recognize some things. Although I liked the first chapter, there was some time inconsistency. Part of the chapter would be written in the present tense and then it would suddenly be written in the past tense. That's not very consistent. The way u are describing the moments seems to be a little stiff too. Sometimes the character seems to lack emotion or at least some expression so I also suggest describing her emotions more detailed and perhaps to add some more fear.
Things to improve on: past tense/present tense (grammar), emotion, description
I would recommend this book to all the Hunger Games fans!
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