1# The drowning wish

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"Well it was worth our money" said my mom while sitting on a beach chear. She wasn't the only one... In this crusier ship there were a lot of rich people... And then us... With just the luck of having won a free ticket in a "7down" bottle. So we decided to have the greatest world tour ever... I just wish dad was here to live it with us... Sins we won the ticket, it's been great, just I think that with my dad it would be better, so I can't stop thinking about it... It's like a drowning wish... But I still had to make the best of this unique oportunity... So I made a tour, myself, around the ship 'cause I was no way going with the guide explaining all boaring stuff that I really don't care... I didn't pay much attencion to the rooms like: passenger room, dance room, theatre and cinema... But there it was, the real deal, the beatimg heart of the boat... The machine room... I read a really big sing saying "ONLY CREW MEMBERS ALLOWED" so, naturally, I ignored it... Sneaking through the room with out any poeple seeing me, I saw the guide guiding people through the machine room but stoping and explaining e-v-e-r-y little detail to e-v-e-r-y single person standing there. Now the thing is that something made me want to enter to the tour... Well not something... Someone... So at such a sight, I tripped... And it was not a nice fall... I fell on a metal bar thay broke... And my arm was close to doing the same thing... The only thing lucky about this was that it didin't... Still I didn't know what to do... And obviously after making so much noise I was discovered... Crew came after me and I didn't know what to do... I jumped to a metal bar in the high tp swing and try to escape but I got grabbed and pulled down... I ran and managed to get betweem them, only to be with more of them... A big crew member with really big mussel just ran at me... He charged... I threw my self aside... So he smashed my arm into the machine... Suddently I notice that every one was running, I look behind me and see that the machines that my arm was smashed into were all on the floor... Screams every where, everyone running to the exits, the floor is ¿rising? "Imposible" I thought... But in deed it was rising, but not a solid floor, a water floor... I got my self up and started running to the exit when I heard "PLEASE HELP ME I CAN'T GET UP!", while i keep running I saw "her" the girl that I saw at the tour... That made me want to go to the tour, that her leg was flattered by the machine I technically through down. I felt guilty... It was my fault that she would die... My mind was like: "Positive side: I have to go and save her

Negative side: but I will die

Positive side: say we will die at least we will die trying to save her... What a romantic death... Right?
Negative side: We will meet more beautifull girls in our lives... LEAVE THIS ONE

Positive side: But if we save her... She will surely fall in love with us...

Negative side: WE WILL DIE "
The words from my positive side were enough to convince me... So I went on to save her... Rough decision for life...

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WELL I'M BACK WRITING STORIES!!!!
And now in English
Sorry for my bad writing and all of that stuff... But still, THANKS FOR READING!!!!!!!
YEY

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