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Have you ever loved someone so much that you couldn't let them go. Thats exactly what happened to me. This summer holidays I fell in love with one person in a band. one direction. you might be thinking which one did you like. well I won't tell you unless you read on so here it goes...
"yehh, babes" I screached excitedly because the summer holidays has began. I vowed to my best friend that this will be the best summer holiday EVER! guess what country we're going to. ENGLAND!!! yep. I'm so excited and so is April (best friend). are flight is in two days. thats it. I've past my exams and I'm travelling since I'm 17. only me and my bestfriend. my mother helped me gain the money but I did hard work such as work in a beautician, work in Starbucks and take all the shifts. Finally I have the money for me. my bestfriend had to work hard too much but she got most of her money from her parents. lucky her. now I can take a break and have fun.
"my suitcase is full as hell" April yelled from her bedroom. my suit case wasnt half full. "wait, can we go shopping" I asked walking into her bedroom. "for what, I cant put anything inside mine" she laughed. I giggled and put on my jacket. "well , I'm going shopping" I half laughed. she huffed and put on her jacket too. "if your going I can't resit but to go too" she sighed. I nudged her on the shoulder and laughed. "don't I always get my way" I smiled.
I had picked three outfits all jeans and tops. "why cant you get something summery" April asked. I shrugged my shoulders and carried on. I found a light yellow see through tank top and shorts to go with it. "who about this" I questioned holding them up. she nodded her head and picked a yellowy sandel to go with it. "wow" I exclaimed when I saw it. she stuffed it in my basket and scanned for other shorts and tops.
After about one whole hour I was holding two gigantic baskets. "this is going to be expensive" I sighed with tiredness. quickly, I paid for it. we ran home excitedly. I picked up all the bags and started unpacking. I read out all the things as I handed them to April, who packet them in my suitcase. "bra's, knickers, shorts, tank top, conditioners, body wash, perfume, belly top, waxing paper, shavers..." I listed and took a breath to carry on. "more shorts, bikini, earings, bracelets, rings.." I continued. ( sorry, there are loads more stuff but I cant be bothered to tell you guys, xx)
"well thats a whole suitcase packed" she muttered. I laughed thinking of the more things I had. "you know there more" I said making her turn away. "do it yourself lazy pance" she said waving her hands in the air. I raised my eyebrows and smiled. "please" I demanded more than begged. She turned around and carried on packing up. "thank you" I said sarcastically.
