FROM THE SPICE AWARDS
7/Aug/2017
(Third Place Winner in Short Stories)
Thanks to sunshine_read for the review!
Joni, by kemorgan65
Plot – 5
Grammar - 4
Spellings - 4
Characters - 4
Settings – 5
Joni is a bewitching tale of a little girl, called Joni, found by a budgie. Steve finds her, wounded by one of the budgie. He cleans her up, and takes her in. Later in the story, he slowly falls for this little creature, so much like a human, yet, so different.
Annika, you have done a great job at framing this story of fantasy. Well done!
Overall: 22/25
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Joni
FantasyHi! My name is Steve and I have a strange story to tell. I don't dare to tell my Mom about it, nor any of my friends... They wouldn't believe me. But I'll tell you, because to you I'm anonymous... === THIRD PLACE SHORT STORY WINNER in The Spice Aw...
