Chapter 1

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One upon a long time ago, there was a little girl.

She was all alone on her rocky planet, so she cried. In due time long, flowing rivers, vast seas and even small, winding streams came out of those masses of tears.

As she grew, life flourished around her, but she still felt lonely.
So she created the humans, and out of them the countries soon came. She remember it as it was yesterday that she comforted the little lost chinese boy, encouraged the lonely blonde younger brother to stand up for himself, helped the albino boy up after he fell, even gave him a small bird, and lastly the light pink scarf she gave the young but oh so cold and lonely country, so he wouldn't freeze in the snow and be unable to reach up to the yellow petals of his tall and proud flowers.

That was all eons of years ago, and the once rocky surface of the earth is now long gone. There are now breathtaking cavesystems, enormous woods and many miles deep seas all around the planet.
One one of these seas we find Gaia, the very earth we're speaking about, on a galleon, otherwise known as a huge ship, sailing together with her many family members toward the end of the Grand Line, searching for, you guessed it! One Piece, the treasure that connects everything, and the owner is labeled the freest person in the world.

    One one of these seas we find Gaia, the very earth we're speaking about, on a galleon, otherwise known as a huge ship, sailing together with her many family members toward the end of the Grand Line, searching for, you guessed it! One Piece,  t...

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"Now hold it there, Miss Narrator! Stop trying to make the nonexistent readers cry! Let me tell the story in a more, cinnamonbun-friendly way, 'kay?"
"You go, Gaia."
"Thanks, now let's get moving, because we have a long way to go!"

What do yo think about my first chapter? I'm a newbie at this, so correcting comments are very welcome. And please keep in mind that English isn't my native tounge, so if I slip up somewhere you are very welcome to correct me.

Ja ne~

Ja ne~

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⏰ Last updated: Oct 12, 2017 ⏰

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